A poem i wrote after talking to the girl i love (spanish)

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Es tan absurdo
Que sin conocerte ya te hecho de menos
Sintiendo que mi fuego se convierte en ceniza
Qué el resplandor de mi ser no será capaz de quemarte
Y que mis palmas no serán capaces de sentir la suavidad de tus mejillas
Pues despertaste en mi
La tentación de tenerte
Con el poco vigor qué me sobra, fuiste la elegida en esta fantasía mía
Pero todo acabó, y no seré yo el que te haga sentir mujer
Ni el que te bese la frente cuando estés dormida
Estaré en otro lugar, escarbando en los escombros de mi penumbra.
 
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So to put you guys in context, i will be going to a mental asylum for 2 months, and today i saw this girl i really like. She is my neighbor.
So I saw her in the streets, and she smiled at me and laughed when she saw me, and we had a small talk.
I really want to get to know her better but it is obsolutely over for me since I will descend hard in the mental asylum
 
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wrote this poem for school yesterday

Wheels turn relentless,
Tracks etched in destiny's iron,
Papers without end lay on the floor,
To destination unknown in the main.
Cogs of fate in a grand machine,
With esoteric keys of ancient rite.
“Here lies the path, Immutable as the stars,
Bound by law.”
The but only half blind man named Kuznetsov screams,
“O Conductor! Conductor, Please!
I forged a partial key!”
“Who is this man who seeks to claim of what is not his?”
Blind passengers watch,
Their voices lost to the rushing wind.
Headed to Manchuria,
for lumber.
Kuznetsov not differenced.
 
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Taco taco mi amor
 
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So to put you guys in context, i will be going to a mental asylum for 2 months, and today i saw this girl i really like. She is my neighbor.
So I saw her in the streets, and she smiled at me and laughed when she saw me, and we had a small talk.
I really want to get to know her better but it is obsolutely over for me since I will descend hard in the mental asylum
Tales from the bolivia asylum
 
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So to put you guys in context, i will be going to a mental asylum for 2 months, and today i saw this girl i really like. She is my neighbor.
So I saw her in the streets, and she smiled at me and laughed when she saw me, and we had a small talk.
I really want to get to know her better but it is obsolutely over for me since I will descend hard in the mental asylum
no roids?
 
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Did all the steroids get to your Head ?:lul:
 
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How many poems has @Clavicular written???
 
Es tan absurdo
Que sin conocerte ya te hecho de menos
Sintiendo que mi fuego se convierte en ceniza
Qué el resplandor de mi ser no será capaz de quemarte
Y que mis palmas no serán capaces de sentir la suavidad de tus mejillas.
Pues despertaste en mi
La tentación de tenerte
Con el poco vigor qué me sobra, fuiste la elegida en esta fantasía mía
Pero todo acabó, y no seré yo el que te haga sentir mujer
Ni el que te bese la frente cuando estés dormida
Estaré en otro lugar, escarbando en los escombros de mi penumbra.
Buen poema, ¿Cómo haces para escribir poemas? Yo le he intentado y no lo logro. Como le haces. Me gustó
tu poema.
 
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Buen poema, ¿Cómo haces para escribir poemas? Yo le he intentado y no lo logro. Como le haces. Me gustó
tu poema.
Muchas gracias hermano, me sale natural, tengo muchisimos otros poemas escritos
 

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