Bros I need real advice, can this song be a hit like Drake's song? my RAP

[lastamericanvirgin]

 

[lastamericanvirgin]

b

 

[PeiFan94]

Why did u do this bud

 

[lastamericanvirgin]

Why did u do this bud

Be honest did u listen to it all is it good

 

[PeiFan94]

Be honest did u listen to it all is it good

It sounds terrible, ur falsetto is not good, and the actual quality of the recording is poor, it's from a mp4 video jfl. If u are being serious idk what to say it's over

 

[lastamericanvirgin]

Why did u do this bud

WAIT
i made it LOUDER . i think its a banger the idea. obv it not perfect i gotta re record with a mic.

 

[PeiFan94]

Is this ur norwooding head

 

[PeiFan94]

WAIT
i made it LOUDER . i think its a banger the idea. obv it not perfect i gotta re record with a mic.

I mean the melody would be fine if it was sang well. It sounds like ur whispering up super close to the mic too. Do u know how to produce or is this just some preset loop u downloaded?

 

[lastamericanvirgin]

I mean the melody would be fine if it was sang well. It sounds like ur whispering up super close to the mic too. Do u know how to produce or is this just some preset loop u downloaded?

its some loop i downloaded and made this singing melody but my mom in next room sleeping so i didnt do it good. but if i get a mic and time alone i can make this song good. SO U ADMIT ITS A GOOD MELODY?

RAPPERS LIKE DRAKE AND XXXTENTACION AND ALL THEM STEAL BEATS AND PPL PRAISE THEM. I DCAN DOO

 

[PeiFan94]

SO U ADMIT ITS A GOOD MELODY?

Yeah the melody is not bad I just thought u were singing some existing pop hit tbh.

RAPPERS LIKE DRAKE AND XXXTENTACION AND ALL THEM STEAL BEATS AND PPL PRAISE THEM. I DCAN DOO

99.99% chance ur not gonna be successful even if ur really good, there are millions of decent musicians on soundcloud and shit with like less than 200 fans. So u may as well be diligent and disciplined so u have something to be proud and knowledgeable of. Also u will be able to get the sound u have in ur head reproduced to a T.

 

[The False Prophet]

ovER

 

[PeiFan94]

RAPPERS LIKE DRAKE AND XXXTENTACION AND ALL THEM STEAL BEATS AND PPL PRAISE THEM. I DCAN DOO

Also if ur doing this just as an attempt and get famous/successful u will hit a dead end motivation-wise. Focus on the craft. Art is incredibly saturated, especially digital art, so if u really do want to stand out, ur best bet is something physical, physical paintings or sculptures, or physical music performance in ur local art scene, etc.

 

[lastamericanvirgin]

Yeah the melody is not bad I just thought u were singing some existing pop hit tbh.

99.99% chance ur not gonna be successful even if ur really good, there are millions of decent musicians on soundcloud and shit with like less than 200 fans. So u may as well be diligent and disciplined so u have something to be proud and knowledgeable of. Also u will be able to get the sound u have in ur head reproduced to a T.

Thank you so much.

Please this is the final one, is this better???

 

[PeiFan94]

Thank you so much.

Please this is the final one, is this better???

I cannot tell if ur trolling or not. U need practice and a proper mic

 

[lastamericanvirgin]

I cannot tell if ur trolling or not. U need practice and a proper mic

True I do. I know man I was recording with my phone and my moms sleeping. But I just wanted to post an idea, thanks man fr.

 

[handsomegrapist]

U sound like shit