COPEFUEL WARNING! This essay got me an A at my C1 English exam

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The topic for the essay was "Does society place too much importance on body image?" :forcedsmile:

"Nowadays, body image is a very relevant topic since social media has led up to the users to compare themselves a lot. However, some may find it irrelevant. In my opinion, i think that body image has a lot of importance in our society. Most people judge you by your looks rather than judging by your abilities, or personality, This is also happening because of the unrealistic standarts that end up influencing us to feel shame on our image. Probably, the best solution to this is to keep body image on a second side and accept ourselves as we are and cope with it, because if not, aiming for unrealistic body standarts fueled by social media can led up to the performance of high risk surgeries and it being harmful for us. To sum up, body image has a lot of relevance in our days and it is a factor to get along with, but deeply in our hearts, we al know that what matters the most is our feelings and personality"

I ended up writing this whole bluepilled cope because my teacher is completely brainwashed :hnghn: it worked:lul:
 
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