Do I have potential to be a writer?

[Deleted member 534]

I wrote this few minutes ago just emptying my brain from ideas and trying new hobby

“The gratitude of human nature had evolved into different parts include the way you see society through different perspective, perhaps the new way of identifying your soul is by creating barriers between yourself and negative thoughts which lead to unharmonious lifestyle and bad critical thinking.”


What you guys think?? Should I keep going I have a lot of ideas

 

[toth77]

depends if you look like alain then yes

 

[Deleted member 534]

depends if you look like alain then yes

Cry for my IQ

 

[Chad69]

Dn rd

 

[Gonthar]

Sounds like a phrase from one of those online random philosophy generators, it's not even grammatically correct.

 

[Deleted member 534]

Sounds like a phrase from one of those online random philosophy generators, it's not even grammatically correct.

No man this is me

I didn’t copy it, it’s from someone

 

[Gazzamogga]

there's two spelling errors and i stopped reading halfway through

the answer is no

 

[Deleted member 534]

there's two spelling errors and i stopped reading halfway through

the answer is no

Irrelevant comment

 

[Gazzamogga]

Irrelevant comment

how old are you?

 

[KingOfRome]

You cannot just extract random fragments of polysyllabic verbiage out of the lexicon and plaster them haphazardly together with no thought given to the coherence of their message. The result will always be naught but fodder to be mocked by your intended audience for the feeble attempt it is at presenting your intellect as beyond its true echelon. To string together aesthetically pleasing sentences requires a degree of tact and finesse, and is a poor substitute for ideas of true veracity and wonder.

Or, in English: You can't just cram big words together in ways that don't make sense. People will see that you're just trying to sound smarter than you really are, and will laugh at you for it. You need to be smart to sound smart.

 

[Maxximilian]

U can try man