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Narcissus🥀

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Through every night
I find myself drowning in my sorrow.
I cry myself to sleep
knowing that I won't see you tomorrow.

you taught me to laugh
you taught me to cry.
and then you left me alone
without saying goodbye.

I still see you in my dreams, in my pain and in my mind,
I see you even when I don't see you, so how come love be blind


You felt my joy, my anger and my pain.
You shared me the shade of a hazel tree and the leaking roof under the rain.


Through every night
I find myself drowning in my sorrow.
I cry myself to sleep hoping for a better tomorrow.


@BrahminBoss @rexylkmxg @kebab @LooksOrDeath

My first attempt at poetry, rate out of ten

 
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@flippasav @ConfusedBolivian @Kamui @ReadBooksEveryday @Iasacrko
 
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My guy 🔛🔝
 
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Through every night
I find myself drowning in my sorrow.
I cry myself to sleep
knowing that I won't see you tomorrow.

you taught me to laugh
you taught me to cry.
and then you left me alone
without saying goodbye.

I still see you in my dreams, in my pain and in my mind,
I see you even when I don't see you, so how come love be blind

You felt my joy, my anger and my pain.
You shared me the shade of a hazel tree and the leaking roof under the rain.


Through every night
I find myself drowning in my sorrow.
I cry myself to sleep hoping for a better tomorrow.



@BrahminBoss @rexylkmxg @kebab @LooksOrDeath

My first attempt at poetry, rate out of ten
Poetry
Its
Supposed
To
Rhyme
And
Sound
Good
 
Like it alot good job, i also do poetry
 
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Through every night
I find myself drowning in my sorrow.
I cry myself to sleep
knowing that I won't see you tomorrow.

you taught me to laugh
you taught me to cry.
and then you left me alone
without saying goodbye.

I still see you in my dreams, in my pain and in my mind,
I see you even when I don't see you, so how come love be blind

You felt my joy, my anger and my pain.
You shared me the shade of a hazel tree and the leaking roof under the rain.


Through every night
I find myself drowning in my sorrow.
I cry myself to sleep hoping for a better tomorrow.



@BrahminBoss @rexylkmxg @kebab @LooksOrDeath

My first attempt at poetry, rate out of ten
pat pat
 
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Am I squishy?
3470869 1686850738716
 
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@Blackgymmax this one is dedicated to you
 
@rand anon @Meraki
 
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Bro is on a spree. good thread on good thread.
 
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Good shit. But how come my poetry posts get 0 replies? I guess I’m shit at that too. Can’t wait to kill myself soon and leave this shit world where I’m unappreciated
 
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Through every night
I find myself drowning in my sorrow.
I cry myself to sleep
knowing that I won't see you tomorrow.

you taught me to laugh
you taught me to cry.
and then you left me alone
without saying goodbye.

I still see you in my dreams, in my pain and in my mind,
I see you even when I don't see you, so how come love be blind

You felt my joy, my anger and my pain.
You shared me the shade of a hazel tree and the leaking roof under the rain.


Through every night
I find myself drowning in my sorrow.
I cry myself to sleep hoping for a better tomorrow.



@BrahminBoss @rexylkmxg @kebab @LooksOrDeath

My first attempt at poetry, rate out of ten
i think that poetry is the ultime rizz, i love this one its very deep and emotional
 
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Actually rly good
 
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Good shit. But how come my poetry posts get 0 replies? I guess I’m shit at that too. Can’t wait to kill myself soon and leave this shit world where I’m unappreciated
That's not true man, I think you're cool.
 
@horizontallytall
 
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just wondering, i used to think these types of things too before losing humanity
Bro thinks he's an anime villain, you're not that guy pal
 
did not read
 
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@blackazure88 @LookinGood
 
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Brother this is actually decent, dm me more good shit. I used to do poetry but I dropped that shit for sketching. I'll dm you some of my old poems
 
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sounds like shit
 

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