wyy
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I’ve been interested in writing/poetry for a bit and here is some of the stuff I’ve written. Id anybody has any tips to make my work sound more fluid and appealing please write them down.
"her teeth, tinted by the embrace of her addiction, still showcased a captivating smile; and within me, the bitter tang of kalopsia lingered."
“her sweet embrace was selcouth; warm and comforting, a hug i’ve been longing for since i could remember”
“the only reason i longed for her was not because of the times we had; it was only ever vorfreude.”
All my life l've been the ugly one. The weird one. The black sheep as they say, l've never known what it feels like to be beautiful or to be comfortable in your own skin, I’ve come to peace with it but it bothers me everyday. Like a stray dog to dirty water all l've ever wanted was beauty. The toxicity of human and creation. I am no more than ugly man, a soul in a hideous shell. I hate myself and what i may be. God. Let me be beautiful.
"her teeth, tinted by the embrace of her addiction, still showcased a captivating smile; and within me, the bitter tang of kalopsia lingered."
“her sweet embrace was selcouth; warm and comforting, a hug i’ve been longing for since i could remember”
“the only reason i longed for her was not because of the times we had; it was only ever vorfreude.”
All my life l've been the ugly one. The weird one. The black sheep as they say, l've never known what it feels like to be beautiful or to be comfortable in your own skin, I’ve come to peace with it but it bothers me everyday. Like a stray dog to dirty water all l've ever wanted was beauty. The toxicity of human and creation. I am no more than ugly man, a soul in a hideous shell. I hate myself and what i may be. God. Let me be beautiful.
