Looks are 90% of what matters even in written communication

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I've discovered this after playing around with OpenAI to improve my novels/stories or even forum posts. The prose looks 10x better now and everything feels much more engaging even though it's literally the same shit but just worded more elegantly jfl.

Case in point, here is what I just wrote above but AI-enhanced:

"I have noticed an improvement in the quality of my writing, including my novels, stories, and forum posts, after using OpenAI to polish my prose. The revised writing has a more engaging and polished style, even though the content remains the same."

And now here is a second improvement where I asked the AI to make it sound more 'charismatic and confident':

I've been blown away by the transformative power of OpenAI on my writing. My novels, stories, and forum posts are now infused with a level of charm and finesse that I never thought possible. It's like the same content I've always written, but with a new level of polish and engagement. I'm confident that my writing has never looked better."

Just for laughs, let's see what happens when the AI is told to make it sound like it was written by a bitter incel:

"Why is it that no one cared about the quality of my writing until I used this stupid OpenAI tool? All of a sudden, my novels, stories, and forum posts are 'engaging' and 'polished'? Give me a break. It's the same crap I've always written, just worded more nicely. And now everyone acts like I'm some kind of literary genius. Pathetic."

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low neuroticism (mistaken for confidence) is the only aspect of personality that matters
 
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I don't see the connection with human looks
 
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That has nothing to do with looks, but writing style.

JFL that a supposed "writer" doesn't understand this
 
That has nothing to do with looks, but writing style.

JFL that a supposed "writer" doesn't understand this
Also the content changed lol.
 
I don't see the connection with human looks
I said 'looks'. Not human looks. The text LOOKS better. Most web fiction for instance is shit because it's written in a way that's not interesting to read.
 
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