Tried posting on TikTok today

[dstivvy]

Is this funny?
Did it make you laugh?
Would you watch this video?
What can I improve on?

 

[dstivvy]

It’s not getting views

 

[Basedman420]

Brutal 0 like

 

[acm]

good funny

u should check out @fakecelclassic on IG he makes good stuff.

don't let a certain someone see this though not even gonna mention his name

 

[Petsmart]

No laugh, lost interest as the guy talks too slow, video is too small in the frame.

For this format to work the video has to grab attention which it doesn’t because it’s small and the colors are super desaturated and gray. The point has to come across super fast, think loud and shocking. Currently the guy in the video has a wet blanket personality with no enthusiasm or energy, why would a normie spend 10 seconds on this not to laugh when he can just scroll further for more dopamine?

 

[dstivvy]

No laugh, lost interest as the guy talks too slow, video is too small in the frame.

For this format to work the video has to grab attention which it doesn’t because it’s small and the colors are super desaturated and gray. The point has to come across super fast, think loud and shocking. Currently the guy in the video has a wet blanket personality with no enthusiasm or energy, why would a normie spend 10 seconds on this not to laugh when he can just scroll further for more dopamine?

Your right Goatis talks way too slow I should have sped up the video. FInding a better, more suitable video should be relatively easy, I’ll do that tomorrow

 

[dstivvy]

Someone liked it thanks