Writing prompt

[Offensive Bias]

Ignoring the cliche premise I want your thoughts on this prompt I made in a few minutes. Any criticism is welcomed! Cheers!

Panning into the caverns of a deep Earth

facility directly in the Cascadian rockies

lies dormant a man encased in a tube filled

with embryonic fuild. Bubbles flutter and

rise with rapid irregularity to the top. The

enclosure glows with a bright blue

surrounded by a room that is darkly lit

with service equipment, instruction

manuals and a workstation nearby to

monitor the state of the encased man. A

bright light shines with the creeking of a

metal door. Too men cladded in lab coats

walk on in with non-electronic tablets

scrubbing information on in a hastily

manner. Glancing by their identification.

One is named Jeremy, the other Andrei.


Don't know how to formatt it properly on this website.

 

[Sprinkles]

 

[wsada]

Did u make it

 

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[Offensive Bias]

 

[Offensive Bias]

Did u make it

Yes, though I I forgot to put the title for it. Actual writing prompts are tenfold the content I have here so it looks pretty bare bones. Plus I shouldn't really expect people to read it tbh.