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Draw along, it's salty long,
A flame, it burns, a flame, a song,
You wouldn't like where it belongs...

An empty evil, stupid rant,
Of no more value than an ant,
A shallow river, windy sand...

Few fools above, they lying love,
They burn and reign, without a pain,
They shine and blind, like mindless doves,
They make the rules, yet are insane.

Without a pain, what a disdain!

Capture the skies, amidst the rise
Of stars that chain like Christmas lights,
A celebration, one of no reason,
Just because swap around the seasons.

Without a pain, what a disdain!

I'm losing might, in this long flight,
My shadow wants me in a fight,
Ominous laugh, it hurts me rough,
Under the rain, in scarcity, in shame..

Without a pain, what a disdain!
 
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bumpy
 
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ALERT ALERT 🚨 GIMP DETECTED. NIGGAS BE WRITING POEMS SHAKESPEARE AHH BOI
 
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“Without pain without disdain” is this shit tuff in India?
 
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“Without pain without disdain” is this shit tuff in India?
nigga at least read it right
Y u even comment on this if u have no understanding of prose
тупая русня
 
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nigga at least read it right
Y u even comment on this if u have no understanding of prose
тупая русня
I’m joking I actually like it
 
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gay
 
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b
 
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good poem nigga
 
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INB4 GPT/DNR/IDC
HUMAN WRITTEN

give name suggestions


Draw along, it's salty long,
A flame, it burns, a flame, a song,
You wouldn't like where it belongs...

An empty evil, stupid rant,
Of no more value than an ant,
A shallow river, windy sand...

Few fools above, they lying love,
They burn and reign, without a pain,
They shine and blind, like mindless doves,
They make the rules, yet are insane.

Without a pain, what a disdain!

Capture the skies, amidst the rise
Of stars that chain like Christmas lights,
A celebration, one of no reason,
Just because swap around the seasons.

Without a pain, what a disdain!

I'm losing might, in this long flight,
My shadow wants me in a fight,
Ominous laugh, it hurts me rough,
Under the rain, in scarcity, in shame..

Without a pain, what a disdain!
typa shit they make you analyze in gcse english

respect tho nigga i actually liked it, it was a good read :love:
 
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INB4 GPT/DNR/IDC
HUMAN WRITTEN

give name suggestions


Draw along, it's salty long,
A flame, it burns, a flame, a song,
You wouldn't like where it belongs...

An empty evil, stupid rant,
Of no more value than an ant,
A shallow river, windy sand...

Few fools above, they lying love,
They burn and reign, without a pain,
They shine and blind, like mindless doves,
They make the rules, yet are insane.

Without a pain, what a disdain!

Capture the skies, amidst the rise
Of stars that chain like Christmas lights,
A celebration, one of no reason,
Just because swap around the seasons.

Without a pain, what a disdain!

I'm losing might, in this long flight,
My shadow wants me in a fight,
Ominous laugh, it hurts me rough,
Under the rain, in scarcity, in shame..

Without a pain, what a disdain!
Its actually good ngl
 
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thank you boys :owo:
i have more i can link it :)
bro u should post them to repfarm high iq cultured ppl :sneaky:

dare i say you have potential to be the edgar allan poe of the org :unsure:
 
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nigga at least read it right
Y u even comment on this if u have no understanding of prose
тупая русня

Mirin your Intellect and Creativity if you actually came up with that btw and not ChatGPT
 
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bro u should post them to repfarm high iq cultured ppl :sneaky:

dare i say you have potential to be the edgar allan poe of the org :unsure:
Its actually good ngl
Mirin your Intellect and Creativity if you actually came up with that btw and not ChatGPT
Thank you so much guys :feelshah::2Bgasm:
Can u link it pls
Here bro :soy:
 
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did not read nigger
 
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An empty evil, stupid rant,
Of no more value than an ant : referring to @zeta's little baby
:feelsthink:
 
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