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It’s a new song I made called “Unlucky” for those sad days you hate being you and you want to hang yourself from the ceiling of the motel 6 after fucking the trans hooker for 160 dollars. Enjoy




Lyrics:

Confusion. Confusion. Confusion.
Born ugly
Born stupid
Born short
Born worthless
Born lost
And what for?


We’re like weeds
we’re pulled up
And cast away
Just like shit
We’re flushed away

why don’t we have a choice
Of being born
We’re unlucky to be lucky
To be born

I just wonder
The reason
God made me me


@isis_Bleach @LancasteR @cromagnon @piec @iblamechico @Always Stay You
 
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why do you tag me? i couldnt care less
 
why do you tag me? i couldnt care less
If you don’t got nothing nice to say don’t say anything at all bud
 
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post orgasm depression music
 
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No Worries Waiting GIF
 
this has potential to be hauntingly beautiful if you worked on it more. good harmonising

i understand the song is supposed to be dissonant but there needs to be at least one element with a solid structure to drive the emotional response, i believe the string element at 0:36 can do this, right now there seems to no intent behind where you introduce and layer them.
 
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this has potential to be hauntingly beautiful if you worked on it more. good harmonising

i understand the song is supposed to be dissonant but there needs to be at least one element with a solid structure to drive the emotional response, i believe the string element at 0:36 can do this, right now there seems to no intent behind where you introduce and layer them.
Thanks for the feed back I’ll get some music lessons soon
 

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