Can someone tell me what i need to improve on?

[lty120]

Psl rating would be nice as well

 

[XIX]

overall bonemass/angularity, nose and haircut.

mark as solution

 

[killuacel]

Too much work needed

Rot in peace knowing this was never your fault

 

[killuacel]

overall bonemass/angularity, nose and haircut.

mark as solution

Yes you really gave him solutions bro!!!!

 

[tijanmuharemovic4@g]

Too much work needed

Rot in peace knowing this was never your fault

he doesnt look bad, what are you on?