Could users review this story I've written

Felt like he was reviewing a song not writing
He didn’t actually read it btw, that nigga is one of the biggest trolls here :lasereyes:

Him aside, I actually liked the story. Keep me updated if you can. :feelsautistic:❤️
 
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It was either this or fking reddit
You should post it to .is, you’d get more responses and real feedback since the site is all oldfags.
 
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He didn’t actually read it btw, that nigga is one of the biggest trolls here :lasereyes:

Him aside, I actually liked the story. Keep me updated if you can. :feelsautistic:❤️
I shall
I think I'll upload it somewhere online when I write about 10 days, and can draw art for it
 
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I shall
I think I'll upload it somewhere online when I write about 10 days, and can draw art for it
Interested to see what the brothers look like standing next to each other :feelskek:
 
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fair enough

reddit might actually be more toxic than the org unironically
reddit may not be as toxic but the writing style they follow is annoying
also i doubt i would get responses
ill see though
 
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Interested to see what the brothers look like standing next to each other :feelskek:
you're really invested in this brother dynamic huh
i think i'll give Isaac a late growth spurt to 6'0 actually
 
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you're really invested in this brother dynamic huh
i think i'll give Isaac a late growth spurt to 6'0 actually
No, you should make him 5’6 instead :bigbrain:

Jfl jk, keep him this way, it’s perfect.
 
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No problem by me
I do hate AI though
do u plan to make Damian fall in love with the blonde but the blonde rejects him and falls in love with Isaac instead
 
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do u plan to make Damian fall in love with the blonde but the blonde rejects him and falls in love with Isaac instead
the blonde is a guy nigga
And no Damian and Luke have never seen each other
 
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the blonde is a guy nigga
And no Damian and Luke have never seen each other
:lul:wtf

the AI thought it was a girl brah

this better not be yaoi
 
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Could you say any thoughts you have on it?
It was well made and super descriptive from the characters even down to the text and you can really contrast how they’re feeling.

Definitely professional
 
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Melody...?
He’s a troll, ignore him.
You guys are braindead. Go look into melody regarding literature. I'm not making things up. The way the words flow matters, especially in university. I took English my first year and my prof emphasized this heavily. You're free to ask anyone who has actually majored in this topic.
 
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You guys are braindead. Go look into melody regarding literature. I'm not making things up. The way the words flow matters, especially in university. I took English my first year and my prof emphasized this heavily. You're free to ask anyone who has actually majored in this topic.
Profile posts temporarily back. Will be disabled if abused. Going to bed soon.
 

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