Critique my Looksmax Anthem Instrumental Mix

[thecel]

My subhuman ass failed to find a "We Are the World" instrumental or karaoke version that doesn't have backing vocals and isn't just the original song with the vocals filtered out. So, I downloaded MIDI files and tried to make the instrumental with default GarageBand instruments JFL.

Give feedback.

 

[Deleted member 2214]

Listen't

 

[AcneScars]

Didn’t listen but welcome back

 

[AlexAP]

Sounds good. I hope the lyrics won't be too autistic.

 

[thecel]

Listen't

No Le Fort 3 for your coomer tier attention span

 

[justadude]

i dont see a "too long" option

 

[Mongrelcel]

The main melody (with the trumpet or whatever the fuck was that) is too quient
Instruments used sound like from a 2004 mexican party mix
The bass is too strong (but I have bass heavy earphones, so maybe its because of that - but still I feel so. In other songs of this type it doesent sound so strong) - making it sound like some rap beat
The guitar is too quiet, just cant just use a guitar riff at the volume as everything else
Feels a bit too busy at times

 

[turkproducer]

The main melody (with the trumpet or whatever the fuck was that) is too quient
Instruments used sound like from a 2004 mexican party mix
The bass is too strong (but I have bass heavy earphones, so maybe its because of that - but still I feel so. In other songs of this type it doesent sound so strong) - making it sound like some rap beat
The guitar is too quiet, just cant just use a guitar riff at the volume as everything else
Feels a bit too busy at times

sounds like mario jfl

op should make more appealing types of music, i can tell he knows music theory. Nice composition of melodies OP

 

[.👽.]

I thought you are gonna sing ngl

 

[Deleted member 2214]

No Le Fort 3 for your coomer tier attention span

Why would anyone get Le Fort when they can just mew?

 

[thecel]

sounds like mario jfl

op should make more appealing types of music, i can tell he knows music theory. Nice composition of melodies OP

I composed a grand total of 0 notes. I just used MIDI files I found online.

 

[Deleted member 6695]

My subhuman ass failed to find a "We Are the World" instrumental or karaoke version that doesn't have backing vocals and isn't just the original song with the vocals filtered out. So, I downloaded MIDI files and tried to make the instrumental with default GarageBand instruments JFL.

Give feedback.

Needs more ear candy
Needs better instrument choices, drums are a little too repetitive sounding

 

[Deleted member 8576]

singing too quiet

 

[Deleted member 10524]

Sounds good

 

[thecel]

Needs more ear candy
Needs better instrument choices, drums are a little too repetitive sounding

I deleted the GarageBand sound library to make room for porn. I can’t mix the track now

 

[Deleted member 6695]

I deleted the GarageBand sound library to make room for porn. I can’t mix the track now

disgusting

 

[thecel]

disgusting

My disk is fucking full (of porn) bro. I don’t even have 1 gig free. I can’t re-download the GarageBand Sound Library, so it’s over for this project. I need the porn!

 

[Zias]

Pretty spot on. I think you need to look at the kick, it has this thump which like RnB but it's not nice and unlike original. Also snare should be different imo.

 

[studiocel]

Not enough 808s and distortion.

 

[LipstickAlley]

bro you need to finish this, an absolute masterpiece