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My dad was at starbucks drivethrough and the lady there was some lesbian faggot and he was looking at her extremely confused
 
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This story is an ambitious yet baffling piece, presenting ideas with the speed and clarity of a runaway train. The pacing is erratic, characters exist in theory more than in practice, and any attempt at structure feels like an afterthought. Themes hover just out of reach, teasing depth without delivering, while transitions are either invisible or absent entirely. It’s a bold experiment in storytelling minimalism—perhaps too bold. Final rating: 2/10—an admirable attempt, but mostly an artistic enigma.
 
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What does he think of you cum worshipping bibblekitty
 
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