Help me on my College Essay about Looksmaxxing

[SixVase]

I am applying to college and I am writing my personal statement about looksmaxxing and the halo effect, and how it changed my life.

Give me poetic terms/phrases I could say.
For example:

• it was never about the hair
• brutal
• A Chad might mog, but when the Jester performs even the King sits to listen

I will not include obvious Incel terminology because that's an Auto-Reject. Normies hear any incel terminology and immediately think of ER and misogyny.

The essay will be about how I discovered how looks matter a bunch, and then i went through a rabbit hole because I was lonely. Then, at my deepest, a girl who was my friend calls me asking to talk, and after talking I realized that looks are not everything. Something like that. Most of it is made up. I am still a KHHV.


Btw, I have 1500 SAT, 4.65 weighted GPA, and I have an AA degree in hs. I am applying to the "Public Ivies" such as UCLA, UF, UVA

 

[roidar]

I am applying to college and I am writing my personal statement about looksmaxxing and the halo effect, and how it changed my life.

Give me poetic terms/phrases I could say.
For example:

• it was never about the hair
• brutal
• A Chad might mog, but when the Jester performs even the King sits to listen

I will not include obvious Incel terminology because that's an Auto-Reject. Normies hear any incel terminology and immediately think of ER and misogyny.

The essay will be about how I discovered how looks matter a bunch, and then i went through a rabbit hole because I was lonely. Then, at my deepest, a girl who was my friend calls me asking to talk, and after talking I realized that looks are not everything. Something like that. Most of it is made up. I am still a KHHV.

nigga youre getting rejected, theyre gonna think youre an incel anyways. change the subject dumbass nigga

 

[toodeepin0]

you are a looser

 

[SixVase]

nigga youre getting rejected, theyre gonna think youre an incel anyways. change the subject dumbass nigga

to what then?

 

[roidar]

to what then?

anything else nigga why tf would I know what to write for a collage essay, im 16.and even if it gets accepted people will make fun of you for being a loser

 

[czechsub3]

I am applying to college and I am writing my personal statement about looksmaxxing and the halo effect, and how it changed my life.

Give me poetic terms/phrases I could say.
For example:

• it was never about the hair
• brutal
• A Chad might mog, but when the Jester performs even the King sits to listen

I will not include obvious Incel terminology because that's an Auto-Reject. Normies hear any incel terminology and immediately think of ER and misogyny.

The essay will be about how I discovered how looks matter a bunch, and then i went through a rabbit hole because I was lonely. Then, at my deepest, a girl who was my friend calls me asking to talk, and after talking I realized that looks are not everything. Something like that. Most of it is made up. I am still a KHHV.


Btw, I have 1500 SAT, 4.65 weighted GPA, and I have an AA degree in hs. I am applying to the "Public Ivies" such as UCLA, UF, UVA

nigga its not gonna workout

 

[SixVase]

anything else nigga why tf would I know what to write for a collage essay, im 16.and even if it gets accepted people will make fun of you for being a loser

no im not bro i am literally good at everything and the only thing i suck at are looks so thats why I obsess over it secretly. like i am good at a lot of hobbies and i have tons of money . i just thought that it was a unique topic so it would work, but i wont do it anymore because if ppl here are hating it then admission officiers will as well

 

[roidar]

no im not bro i am literally good at everything and the only thing i suck at are looks so thats why I obsess over it secretly. like i am good at a lot of hobbies and i have tons of money . i just thought that it was a unique topic so it would work, but i wont do it anymore because if ppl here are hating it then admission officiers will as well

yeah just try and do any other topic that wont get you rejected goodluck