How can I improve, and what should I improve? I'm new here.

[buzz lightyear]

I'm new here, I accept criticism and opinions, feel free to say what you think without any problem. If there are any typos, it's because I'm Brazilian and I don't know much English.

 

[yussimania]

 

[buzz lightyear]

I'm new here, I accept criticism and opinions, feel free to say what you think without any problem. If there are any typos, it's because I'm Brazilian and I don't know much English

I forgot to mention, I'm 19 years old.

 

[BPRoryRory]

JAW