BigJimsWornOutTires
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I know I started the story a day or two before unleashing it online. But I wish I hadn't. Not all readers are intelligent and strong. Some might be paranoid. Then add sleep deprivation, or jet lag, ugh... what personal thoughts of a reader might turn deadly.
looksmax.org
I don't understand why I wrote it. I know I was learning 30-something words that week. But why the laundromat?
Why did I include a picture from Florida?
Why Brandy? Ugh, not only that rhymes with another name of a girl, but it's also her favorite alcoholic beverage.
Why did I make her 115 pounds?
Why would I know those things?
And why did I edit the third character's description at the final moment? It was supposed to be an emaciated baldheaded man-looking dyke. Of course, the main character was mocking a baldheaded guy.
If I could go back in time before I posted that story thread, I would send it into the abyss.
Dirty Laundry
In 2015 I'd met a woman during The Laundry. She seemed unruly to my gaze flirts as she shown with rebukes. Perhaps it was my tousled hair, that cowlick bristling wrong assumptions as if I wasn't a clean man. Usually, I'm a dashing gent. Take outstanding care of my appearance in a meticulous...
looksmax.org
I don't understand why I wrote it. I know I was learning 30-something words that week. But why the laundromat?
Why did I include a picture from Florida?
Why Brandy? Ugh, not only that rhymes with another name of a girl, but it's also her favorite alcoholic beverage.
Why did I make her 115 pounds?
Why would I know those things?
And why did I edit the third character's description at the final moment? It was supposed to be an emaciated baldheaded man-looking dyke. Of course, the main character was mocking a baldheaded guy.
If I could go back in time before I posted that story thread, I would send it into the abyss.
