I starred in a Short Film

[LowTrust]

it's basically about a badboy JB maxxer and JB falling in love, this was one of the clips, for a project please give advice and constructive criticisms all welcome

 

[Deleted member 21182]

My god that girl is ugly but ur gl tho short

 

[Deleted member 21824]

she enjoy rape from chade?

 

[LowTrust]

My god that girl is ugly

yeah true, she isn't my girlfriend, we just needed to work together for the project

ur gl tho short

yup im manlet

she enjoy rape from chade?

yes brother

 

[Vermilioncore]

I just know this bitch loves cock in her ass, she just looks the type

 

[aBetterMii]

Brag thread

 

[khvirgin]

Indian tiktok tier

 

[slayer69]

the whole choreography is bad

thats a directing problem

but i'll focus on ur acting skills:
- autistic deep staring, there is no chemistry, u r staring at her for the sake of it, resisting all sorts of blinking and eye moment within eye contact.
- breaking eye contact when when u and her are shaking. that breaks the chemistry of the scene. makes me question, "is this guy even into her? he looks like he's larping"
-this was super cringe

u dont just rush to catch her wrists. u dont react so fast, especially when ur focus is on her eyes and her face (when u r into her). doing it so fast just goes to show u r not into her

- why leave her arms here?

- outright bad acting here, looks like someone is ploughing u, u r not invested in her AT ALL

after that,

u so autistically unnaturally move ur eyes up at her, its so weird and unnatural. no one buys this shit here, its a dogpoo of a utter mess

and everything else is so dogshit after that

especially when u breathe in and swallow SO OBVIOUSLY, it is extremely vomit inducing. u have to do it subtly very naturally.

her acting was unbelievably dogpoo as well


overall rating:
direction rating: 0/10
ur acting: 1/10
her acting: 0.5/10
shots, etc: 0.2/10

 

[khvirgin]

Brag thread

 

[Deleted member 29786]

dhar mann video tier

 

[slayer69]

@aBetterMii why the jfl react?

 

[LowTrust]

Brag thread

there's no brags here, the girl is like weak LTB with child halo

the whole choreography is bad

thats a directing problem

but i'll focus on ur acting skills:
- autistic deep staring, there is no chemistry, u r staring at her for the sake of it, resisting all sorts of blinking and eye moment within eye contact.
- breaking eye contact when when u and her are shaking. that breaks the chemistry of the scene. makes me question, "is this guy even into her? he looks like he's larping"
-this was super cringe
View attachment 2258541
u dont just rush to catch her wrists. u dont react so fast, especially when ur focus is on her eyes and her face (when u r into her). doing it so fast just goes to show u r not into her

- why leave her arms here?
View attachment 2258543

- outright bad acting here, looks like someone is ploughing u, u r not invested in her AT ALL

View attachment 2258542

after that,
View attachment 2258545View attachment 2258546

u so autistically unnaturally move ur eyes up at her, its so weird and unnatural. no one buys this shit here, its a dogpoo of a utter mess

and everything else is so dogshit after that

especially when u breathe in and swallow SO OBVIOUSLY, it is extremely vomit inducing. u have to do it subtly very naturally.

her acting was unbelievably dogpoo as well


overall rating:
direction rating: 0/10
ur acting: 1/10
her acting: 0.5/10
shots, etc: 0.2/10

thanks for criticisms, I'll try to improve on this.

 

[aBetterMii]

@aBetterMii why the jfl react?

Autistic crtique of this autism

 

[aBetterMii]

there's no brags here, the girl is like weak LTB with child halo

thanks for criticisms, I'll try to improve on this.

I mean that a female is letting you come into physical contact with her at all, especially this whole scene

 

[slayer69]

Autistic crtique of this autism

its not an autistic critique, ive pointed out almost all flaws in his acting

meanwhile u posted some spam that u do with every thread. op wants some real criticism.
if it is so autistic, why dont u give him some real inputs

 

[LowTrust]

I mean that a female is letting you come into physical contact with her at all, especially this whole scene

would you say the same thing if it was a black 300lbs "woman"?

whether or not something is bragging is dependent on if you wish you were in their situation or not, so for most people I would've assumed this wouldn't be bragging, and the main goal of the thread was to get critique while showing something I was in, rather than bragging that some LTB let me get near her

 

[Deleted member 18879]

ngl the shots are really bad

 

[aBetterMii]

would you say the same thing if it was a black 300lbs "woman"?

whether or not something is bragging is dependent on if you wish you were in their situation or not, so for most people I would've assumed this wouldn't be bragging, and the main goal of the thread was to get critique while showing something I was in, rather than bragging that some LTB let me get near her

I want to be in this situation but with a HTB alt girl

 

[inceI]

slayer

 

[Deleted member 21824]

View attachment 2258536

it's basically about a badboy JB maxxer and JB falling in love, this was one of the clips, for a project please give advice and constructive criticisms all welcome

the whole choreography is bad

thats a directing problem

but i'll focus on ur acting skills:
- autistic deep staring, there is no chemistry, u r staring at her for the sake of it, resisting all sorts of blinking and eye moment within eye contact.
- breaking eye contact when when u and her are shaking. that breaks the chemistry of the scene. makes me question, "is this guy even into her? he looks like he's larping"
-this was super cringe
View attachment 2258541
u dont just rush to catch her wrists. u dont react so fast, especially when ur focus is on her eyes and her face (when u r into her). doing it so fast just goes to show u r not into her

- why leave her arms here?
View attachment 2258543

- outright bad acting here, looks like someone is ploughing u, u r not invested in her AT ALL

View attachment 2258542

after that,
View attachment 2258545View attachment 2258546

u so autistically unnaturally move ur eyes up at her, its so weird and unnatural. no one buys this shit here, its a dogpoo of a utter mess

and everything else is so dogshit after that

especially when u breathe in and swallow SO OBVIOUSLY, it is extremely vomit inducing. u have to do it subtly very naturally.

her acting was unbelievably dogpoo as well


overall rating:
direction rating: 0/10
ur acting: 1/10
her acting: 0.5/10
shots, etc: 0.2/10

My god that girl is ugly but ur gl tho short

do you guys seriously believe that sergi cabrer prettyboy look alike is him? no way a looksmax rotter would get invited to shoot a film by some NT video taker lmao

 

[Bvnny.]

You look cute + manlet, should be going gay for pay and doing gay porn instead of that utter crap you call acting.

 

[slayer69]

do you guys seriously believe that sergi cabrer prettyboy look alike is him? no way a looksmax rotter would get invited to shoot a film by some NT video taker lmao

who cares

i gave criticism of the acting, point still stands regardless if it is OP or not

 

[Deleted member 21182]

do you guys seriously believe that sergi cabrer prettyboy look alike is him? no way a looksmax rotter would get invited to shoot a film by some NT video taker lmao

I dont but idc rather he’s lying or not won’t change my life

 

[Reformed]

Bro u are tiny

 

[5.5psl]

the whole choreography is bad

thats a directing problem

but i'll focus on ur acting skills:
- autistic deep staring, there is no chemistry, u r staring at her for the sake of it, resisting all sorts of blinking and eye moment within eye contact.
- breaking eye contact when when u and her are shaking. that breaks the chemistry of the scene. makes me question, "is this guy even into her? he looks like he's larping"
-this was super cringe
View attachment 2258541
u dont just rush to catch her wrists. u dont react so fast, especially when ur focus is on her eyes and her face (when u r into her). doing it so fast just goes to show u r not into her

- why leave her arms here?
View attachment 2258543

- outright bad acting here, looks like someone is ploughing u, u r not invested in her AT ALL

View attachment 2258542

after that,
View attachment 2258545View attachment 2258546

u so autistically unnaturally move ur eyes up at her, its so weird and unnatural. no one buys this shit here, its a dogpoo of a utter mess

and everything else is so dogshit after that

especially when u breathe in and swallow SO OBVIOUSLY, it is extremely vomit inducing. u have to do it subtly very naturally.

her acting was unbelievably dogpoo as well


overall rating:
direction rating: 0/10
ur acting: 1/10
her acting: 0.5/10
shots, etc: 0.2/10

Imagine having the time to write such long essays for a short film of barely 30 seconds posted on an incel forum .

 

[LowTrust]

do you guys seriously believe that sergi cabrer prettyboy look alike is him? no way a looksmax rotter would get invited to shoot a film by some NT video taker lmao

cope why else would I larp about being manlet, and this was not a professional short film, it was a group media project

You look cute + manlet, should be going gay for pay and doing gay porn instead of that utter crap you call acting.

I want to become a dhar mann actor

 

[Deleted member 21824]

cope why else would I larp about being manlet, and this was not a professional short film, it was a group media project

I want to become a dhar mann actor

okay than post another photo of you post a front and side profile lmao

 

[LowTrust]

okay than post another photo of you post a front and side profile lmao

okay

Spoiler: .

whats the point in living like this

im ugly as fuck, i got scoliosis, i got serborheicc dermatitis (anyone can relate? 😭😭), i got low T, bad frame. only good thing about me is white and 6'2. my dick used to be quite big but erections got fucked from finastride and now its not as big are these enough to validate killing myself ;-;

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[Deleted member 21824]

okay

Spoiler: .

whats the point in living like this

im ugly as fuck, i got scoliosis, i got serborheicc dermatitis (anyone can relate? 😭😭), i got low T, bad frame. only good thing about me is white and 6'2. my dick used to be quite big but erections got fucked from finastride and now its not as big are these enough to validate killing myself ;-;

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JoinedNov 26, 2022

mogged

 

[Lebgfinal]

chad bragging thread
didnt read

 

[Bvnny.]

cope why else would I larp about being manlet, and this was not a professional short film, it was a group media project

I want to become a dhar mann actor

Become a Lucas Entertainment or Falcon Studios actor instead.

 

[slayer69]

Imagine having the time to write such long essays for a short film of barely 30 seconds posted on an incel forum .

took me 20 secs to write that

 

[LowTrust]

Become a Lucas Entertainment or Falcon Studios actor instead.

do they pay a lot? How can I get into it? This was just a media project idk how to contact these people

chad bragging thread
didnt read

where's the bragging? Now you know I am manlet with shitty collagen who got to spend time with kid looking ltb

 

[Bvnny.]

do they pay a lot? How can I get into it? This was just a media project idk how to contact these people

Prolly just send your resume to their websites, idk, I'm not a gay porn actor, pal.

 

[ascension]

You look good but the acting is earth-shatteringly bad

 

[LowTrust]

You look good but the acting is earth-shatteringly bad

is it enough to star in a dhar mann video?

 

[ascension]

is it enough to star in a dhar mann video?

Absolutely

 

[LowTrust]

I can be the good guy hero who gets bullied for being short then makes them regret it when I browse obscure autistic sites looksmax.org and pay 1ncels to go ER on the bullys

Absolutely

 

[ascension]

I can be the good guy hero who gets bullied for being short then makes them regret it when I browse obscure autistic sites looksmax.org and pay 1ncels to go ER on the bullys

You have the looks but you need to learn some acting from the real Star:

Rating the BULL's acting skills (in-depth review)

Alright boys, I really don't have anything better to do with my life and I don't meet the looks requirement to walk in public in London without getting arrested. So I will be carrying out some reviews of @the BULL 's acting skills, and the best one will be submitted to a casting agency. Let's...

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