I wish I were black: a poem

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Black backs beneath the merciless white sky,
Small, foolish creatures, born to eat and die.

They bickered over fruit, they scratched, they slept,
And through the heat their simple minds they kept.
No grand idea had poisoned them with sight;
No question followed them into the night.

How low they are, I thought. How far beneath
The splendid curse that gives a man his teeth
For every mystery, his mind a flame
That burns the world and then demands its name.

They do not mourn the passing of an hour.
They do not dream of empire, truth, or power.
They do not stand beneath the stars and plead
For some vast answer to their private need.

And God, how I despised them for their peace.
To be so small, so empty, yet released.

I know that I am greater. This is true.
And that is why I envy what they do.

Give me their little mind, their narrow world.
The sun, the trees, the hair around them curled.
Let me be ignorant of what I am.
A lesser beast beneath a greater man.

Let wisdom keep its throne, its crown, its chain.
I have no strength for being wise with a brain.
If thought is height, then let me gladly fall
And be one of those creatures after all.

Not noble. Not profound. Not even free
By any definition known to me.

Just lesser-
and, for once,
less burdened by being me.
 
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notice how only white guys will do weird shit like this
 
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Black backs beneath the merciless white sky,
Small, foolish creatures, born to eat and die.

They bickered over fruit, they scratched, they slept,
And through the heat their simple minds they kept.
No grand idea had poisoned them with sight;
No question followed them into the night.

How low they are, I thought. How far beneath
The splendid curse that gives a man his teeth
For every mystery, his mind a flame
That burns the world and then demands its name.

They do not mourn the passing of an hour.
They do not dream of empire, truth, or power.
They do not stand beneath the stars and plead
For some vast answer to their private need.

And God, how I despised them for their peace.
To be so small, so empty, yet released.

I know that I am greater. This is true.
And that is why I envy what they do.

Give me their little mind, their narrow world.
The sun, the trees, the hair around them curled.
Let me be ignorant of what I am.
A lesser beast beneath a greater man.

Let wisdom keep its throne, its crown, its chain.
I have no strength for being wise with a brain.
If thought is height, then let me gladly fall
And be one of those creatures after all.

Not noble. Not profound. Not even free
By any definition known to me.

Just lesser-
and, for once,
less burdened by being me.
How bored are you bro
 
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i dont wish that shit:lul:
 
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How bored are you bro
"ChatGPT make a poem about a man who wishes he were a monkey that lived in the desert because monkeys are dumber, but also give it an insulting tone towards the monkeys because they are dumber"

and then I copy-paste and change like 10 words
 
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good job @Sub->CL hoping u change the course of poetic history of the 21st century and affect people way into the millenia to come
 
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Was cringing so bad ong :lul:
 
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"ChatGPT make a poem about a man who wishes he were a monkey that lived in the desert because monkeys are dumber, but also give it an insulting tone towards the monkeys because they are dumber"

and then I copy-paste and change like 10 words
Wow, it would’ve been much cooler if you wrote it yourself man..
 

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