making a song on being NT, how can i make it better? W/demo

[Deleted member 14815]

 

[Deleted member 14693]

JFL this actually slaps ngl.

I guess a better mic would help but maybe thats nitpicky

 

[Dr. Bludy]

Damn bro you gonna make it out from the The sewers of bangalore wit dis banger

 

[Bewusst]

Sounds like a terribly-mixed yet catchy unreleased track from the 80's

 

[Deleted member 27152]

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I wrote some basic ideas for a song about being a non-NT robot. I'll probably have no use for it, so take my lyrics and concepts.

As for actual advice I can't give much, I'm still shit at guitar.

(Pasted from song text file)

"Undefined"

-Equate social failing to shitty code
-Like a a machine repeats the same action perfectly, I fail socially every time
-Being a machine is a double entendre, as I am a robot, stiff and consistent with how I act
-Triple entendre (TYBG), I am also a robot in the way I try to emulate people, not being original
-Missing object class, can't fit into any particular group (Object oriented languages)

Sample lyric:

This is such shitty code
Where is the debug mode
Wanna kill myself, exit node

Lots of computer program / protocol references (IRC, l2p, photoshop = looksmaxxing etc)

 

[Deleted member 27152]

@curlyheadjames sign him

 

[Deleted member 27152]

bump good song

 

[Deleted member 14815]

@curlyheadjames sign him

tbh if he did that would motivate me to mix and master a full lp, with the disco genre

 

[Deleted member 23245]

Damn bro you gonna make it out from the The sewers of bangalore wit dis banger

making it out of dharavi slums

 

[Lebgfinal]

be actually NT could help