Musicmaxing | CRITIQUE GarageBand Pop Music Production (Instrumental)

[thecel]

• Tempo = 110 BPM
• Key = F♯|G♭ Major
• Chord Progression = I–V–vi–IV

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I PMed this track to some members, and they said it sounds like kids music. How can I make it sound better? Please feedback-max and criticism-max ITT.

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and suggest lyrics

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PM me if you want to sing on it. We can be famous blackpill musicians.

 

[Toth's thot]

my girl, she's my wonderful world

 

[HOLYFUARK]

Thecelberg you should hire some ghetto rat to hop on this beat you ll be millionaire

 

[Alt Number 3]

imagine this happy feel good uppity beat. then some blackpiller rapping how his life is over, jews won, kill women, my dick is very small etc.

 

[n0rthface]

I will make a song with you

 

[aBetterMii]

@AlexBrown84 hop on dis beat

 

[Hypno]

Yeah it does feel lame..get some dark traps in there..put some synths and make it more cool like devilish

 

[aBetterMii]

I wanna make blackpill numetal

 

[thecel]

imagine this happy feel good uppity beat. then some blackpiller rapping how his life is over, jews won, kill women, my dick is very small etc.

click here to listen to suifuel blackpill song

 

[Alt Number 3]

click here to listen to suifuel blackpill song

not clicking that virus ip grabber sorry bro

 

[thecel]

not clicking that virus ip grabber sorry bro

Vocaroo’s embeds are invisible cuz they’re 1 pixel wide (looked at the CSS in DevTools)

The admins should make it possible to post UNFURLING links to pages that can be embedded.

Why don’t all URLs unfurl? @Alexanderr

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[Alt Number 3]

Vocaroo’s embeds are invisible cuz they’re 1 pixel wide (looked at the CSS in DevTools)

The admins should make it possible to post UNFURLING links to pages that can be embedded.

Why don’t all URLs unfurl? @Alexanderr

@Alexanderr Most links posted to this forum “unfurl” into rich previews that contain title, description, image, and favicon: https://incels.wiki/w/Main_Page An example of an unfurled link. It shows up as a preview box and not a regular URL. Some links don’t unfurl. Like these...

looksmax.org

nice try bro. Hol up lemme turn on my VPN rq