whiteissuperior
Bu to the sinner he gives the task of gathering.
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@tyronelite
Positives)
@tyronelite looks way better in motion
A solid amount of Chads in the video
Critiques
-BIGGEST CON: The white guy is a turbo subhuman, with a high voice, sounds and looks awkward as hell, a 4/10 at BEST no charisma on the camera. Looks turbo cucked. I mean look at that cuck giggle he made in the dominant Chad's presence at 8:45. He can't be trained, he just needs to be taken off IMMEDIATELY
-Tyronelite, you need more charisma on cam. Unlike your friend, your charisma is ascendable. You need to deep voice max (I can give you lessons), and flirt/back and forth with the girls more, and make fun of the guys who don't slay, and make fun of guys who don't slay with guys who do slay, subtly red/blackpilling normies
-Questions were formulaic and there was no overarching narrative, and didn't flow with each other. "Is John Allen taking us to the superbowl!? Ok so what advice for guys who are virgins". These questions don't flow together at all and aren't conversational, so it's more interviewy and not conversational. There needs to be an overall actual theme to these vids and a point/theme you're trying to bring home. Narrative is what drives youtube vids and media in general.
-The people you interviewed droned on about nothing without saying anything wild. You should have clipped the funniest parts they said and added sound effects, rather than making me watch a 25 minute video about nothing and watch normies drone on.
-Tyronelite is in desperate need of a visit to Taban (no offense brother, but it would ascend you hard)
-You need to show wild provocative things on camera, whether it be make outs, twerking, butt slapping, fights, something provocative needs to happen so the rices and curries watching this video who don't step out on weekends can get their fuel of social interaction from these vids. Nothing entertaining happened.
-Again, shit needs to be conversational. People need to look at you and be like "how charismatic these two are" (itll never happen from your friend). You need to work on structuring your questions to make for better convos, and your flirting skills for girls, and your clowning skills for guys.
Overall, good first video, channels I reccommend watching to emmulate are Jack Manley, All Gas No Brakes, and The Minorities
SOurce (my text game is shit, and i am insecure asl, but my irl charisma is unironically 12/10 everyone tells me all the time)
Positives)
@tyronelite looks way better in motion
A solid amount of Chads in the video
Critiques
-BIGGEST CON: The white guy is a turbo subhuman, with a high voice, sounds and looks awkward as hell, a 4/10 at BEST no charisma on the camera. Looks turbo cucked. I mean look at that cuck giggle he made in the dominant Chad's presence at 8:45. He can't be trained, he just needs to be taken off IMMEDIATELY
-Tyronelite, you need more charisma on cam. Unlike your friend, your charisma is ascendable. You need to deep voice max (I can give you lessons), and flirt/back and forth with the girls more, and make fun of the guys who don't slay, and make fun of guys who don't slay with guys who do slay, subtly red/blackpilling normies
-Questions were formulaic and there was no overarching narrative, and didn't flow with each other. "Is John Allen taking us to the superbowl!? Ok so what advice for guys who are virgins". These questions don't flow together at all and aren't conversational, so it's more interviewy and not conversational. There needs to be an overall actual theme to these vids and a point/theme you're trying to bring home. Narrative is what drives youtube vids and media in general.
-The people you interviewed droned on about nothing without saying anything wild. You should have clipped the funniest parts they said and added sound effects, rather than making me watch a 25 minute video about nothing and watch normies drone on.
-Tyronelite is in desperate need of a visit to Taban (no offense brother, but it would ascend you hard)
-You need to show wild provocative things on camera, whether it be make outs, twerking, butt slapping, fights, something provocative needs to happen so the rices and curries watching this video who don't step out on weekends can get their fuel of social interaction from these vids. Nothing entertaining happened.
-Again, shit needs to be conversational. People need to look at you and be like "how charismatic these two are" (itll never happen from your friend). You need to work on structuring your questions to make for better convos, and your flirting skills for girls, and your clowning skills for guys.
Overall, good first video, channels I reccommend watching to emmulate are Jack Manley, All Gas No Brakes, and The Minorities
SOurce (my text game is shit, and i am insecure asl, but my irl charisma is unironically 12/10 everyone tells me all the time)
