My first self-recorded poem.

Poisonpunk3

Poisonpunk3

Hypocrisy is man's best weapon and worst foe.
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Mirror, Mirror

Hang on my left wall,

When my eyes catch your glass

I think about all

On my end, all that which could have yet been

My flaws, they sure are a terrible scene.

I can't comprehend,

the feel that compells me,

in making amends,

this shit cannot be.

A rhetorical question,

why my peer hates with passion,

I take a good look at my useless reflection.

A hundred long spears

they're thrown in my same direction,

a battle I know I can't win,

Fuck, I think I gave up on 'ascension.


A little corny, I'll be honest. But I hope it resonates.
 
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