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tomacōck

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Poem 1:
Summer shine, drops fall in chime,
Slowly, clouds arise, not shy
Of cleaning out the sky's loud shout,
The thunder, rolling, keeps it's grout.
Don't miss away, along the way
The word, the meaning, don't go astray.
Your love within will let you win -
Guard it like gem, away from sin.
Poem 2:
Shame and lies of fail and tries,
In loss of power, true demise...
Disheartened man who fiercely ran
From painful crisis which began
Before his hands, before is eyes,
But must stay stoic, kind and wise.
Must urge he, want, and wildly hunt,
For he's a man and not a cunt.

mogs?
 
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faggot
 
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Poem 1:
Summer shine, drops fall in chime
Slowly, clouds arise, not shy
Of cleaning out the sky's loud shout
The thunder, rolling, keeps it's grout
Don't miss away, along the way
The word, the meaning, don't go astray
Your love within will let you win -
Guard it like gem, away from sin.
Poem 2:
Shame and lies of fail and tries
The loss of power, true demise
Disheartened man who fiercely ran
From painful crisis which began
Before his hands, before is eyes
But must stay stoic, kind and wise
Must urge he, want, and wildly hunt,
For he's a man and not a cunt.
mogs?
chatgpt + paraphrase those who know
 
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Is this secretly written by a foid or by chatgpt
 
Poem 1:
Summer shine, drops fall in chime
Slowly, clouds arise, not shy
Of cleaning out the sky's loud shout
The thunder, rolling, keeps it's grout
Don't miss away, along the way
The word, the meaning, don't go astray
Your love within will let you win -
Guard it like gem, away from sin.
Poem 2:
Shame and lies of fail and tries
The loss of power, true demise
Disheartened man who fiercely ran
From painful crisis which began
Before his hands, before is eyes
But must stay stoic, kind and wise
Must urge he, want, and wildly hunt,
For he's a man and not a cunt.
mogs?
Never advertise some bullshit like this on discord ever again
 
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Poems don’t need to rhyme bra
 
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Will read after sleepi :)
 
Good poem
 
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Poem 2:
Shame and lies of fail and tries,
In loss of power, true demise...
Disheartened man who fiercely ran
From painful crisis which began
Before his hands, before is eyes,
But must stay stoic, kind and wise.
Must urge he, want, and wildly hunt,
For he's a man and not a cunt.
ts speaks to me twin :love:

nah like lowk no corny shit i feel this one twin this is hella applicable to my life rn, u got potential kid...
 
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ts speaks to me twin :love:

nah like lowk no corny shit i feel this one twin this is hella applicable to my life rn, u got potential kid...
I'm glad you found meaning in my words, thank you :)
 
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