Rate me, 15yo 5'11

[WantBetter]

My first post about this didn't go so well since the video was old and my hair was wet. Here’s a new video with my hair actually dry. Mind giving me an honest rate and some feedback on what to improve? I'm 180cm / 5'11" and 65kg / 143 lbs.

 

[MROK1231]

My first post about this didn't go so well since the video was old and my hair was wet. Here’s a new video with my hair actually dry. Mind giving me an honest rate and some feedback on what to improve? I'm 180cm / 5'11" and 65kg / 143 lbs.

ltn