Rate my funnel for dropshipping please

[Whitepillnigga]

Hello guys I'm trying to sell this e bike product and I made a funnel/site for it please let me know if it's valid or not and would you ever consider buying it if you were looking for a e bike thank you

Sales page

tinyurl.com

 

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Looks bad.

 

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Who would drop $800 on a website like this?

It looks like a scam

 

[Whitepillnigga]

Looks bad.

Why is that does it look very unprofessional? It's my first so I'm still trying to get better

 

[Whitepillnigga]

Who would drop $800 on a website like this?

It looks like a scam

800$ for a e bike is valid need to make my site more clean and legit then

 

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What's those random shapes in the top left corner? Looks like some vibecoded bullshit.

The other "links" circled don't link to shit.

These images don't "blend in" with your site aesthetic AT ALL -- they look like the shit you see on ebay listings.

low quality decals or whatever you call them

look pretty shit

why is there a rocket??

reviews not centered + why are you using a gmail contact email

i'd assume ur gonna buy ur own domain and then make an email linked to it






I'm just looking at this from a consumer perspective, and I'm not an expert obviously and I js pointed out the most obvious issues

Look up a video looking into psychology and shit

 

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800$ for a e bike is valid need to make my site more clean and legit then

Even if $800 is valid, it's a bunch of money

You need to think about why would someone buy from a sketchy looking website when they could buy from Amazon and ensure the safety of their money

 

[Whitepillnigga]

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What's those random shapes in the top left corner? Looks like some vibecoded bullshit.

The other "links" circled don't link to shit.

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These images don't "blend in" with your site aesthetic AT ALL -- they look like the shit you see on ebay listings.

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low quality decals or whatever you call them

look pretty shit

why is there a rocket??

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reviews not centered + why are you using a gmail contact email

i'd assume ur gonna buy ur own domain and then make an email linked to it






I'm just looking at this from a consumer perspective, and I'm not an expert obviously and I js pointed out the most obvious issues

Look up a video looking into psychology and shit

Yo thanks for the detailed feedback Brodie

Nah it's still in the process it's not fully done I'm still working on the buttons so when you click on it it'll lead you to a new site, order form or upsell page they are not done yet so I can't link them yet

The images does look a lil off and cheap there's not that many pic's of it on the internet but I'll try to see if I can find more or order it and take some pic's myself lol

for the decals I just low-key asked chatgpt to make some for me that'll suit the e bike I might change up on them a little I kinda like em tho

I'll try fixing the reviews plus I feel like if the colours were dark blue like the site it'll fit better with the aesthetic

Appreciate it tho bro I'll see what I can do