Rate my Shopify Store before I launch FB ADS

[zenox]

ELÉON

Transform your daily skincare ritual with ELÉON Renewal Cream—a luxurious moisturiser formulated to support healthier, smoother, and more radiant-looking skin.

eleonskincare.myshopify.com

any honest advice would be appreciated, i would like to know how this looks to others because I'm of course biased towards overestimating the extent to which my store has a potentially high-conversion rate.

and i know org isnt the ideal place to ask, but its 1am rn and i really wanna just launch the ads

 

[zenox]

ELÉON

Transform your daily skincare ritual with ELÉON Renewal Cream—a luxurious moisturiser formulated to support healthier, smoother, and more radiant-looking skin.

eleonskincare.myshopify.com

any honest advice would be appreciated, i would like to know how this looks to others because I'm of course biased towards overestimating the extent to which my store has a potentially high-conversion rate.

and i know org isnt the ideal place to ask, but its 1am rn and i really wanna just launch the ads

bump

 

[Viriato_catholic]

bump

 

[SQL2VD]

from a first glance it looks good

 

[SQL2VD]

oh wait no i see AI generated content

 

[greynathan]

ELÉON

Transform your daily skincare ritual with ELÉON Renewal Cream—a luxurious moisturiser formulated to support healthier, smoother, and more radiant-looking skin.

eleonskincare.myshopify.com

any honest advice would be appreciated, i would like to know how this looks to others because I'm of course biased towards overestimating the extent to which my store has a potentially high-conversion rate.

and i know org isnt the ideal place to ask, but its 1am rn and i really wanna just launch the ads

get a actual domain bro this looks so generic, please tell me ur not doing organic ad

 

[zenox]

get a actual domain bro this looks so generic, please tell me ur not doing organic ad

facebook ads. so u think the issue is the domain or the website itself being "generic"

 

[zenox]

oh wait no i see AI generated content
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yeah, i was thinking i had to change that it looks hella unrealistic. i dont actually have any users so ai is the only option for that slider. should i make it less noticeable?

 

[greynathan]

facebook ads. so u think the issue is the domain or the website itself being "generic"

both its the way it is set up, dropshippers are everywhere. the site by itself is not that bad, but if you do simple advertisements you will fail. i recommend getting a middle aged white woman to ad in vids, because thats gonna be 90% of ur customer base.

 

[chombo]

You just got a random ai to make your website not like old niggas are gonna tell so passable

 

[SQL2VD]

yeah, i was thinking i had to change that it looks hella unrealistic. i dont actually have any users so ai is the only option for that slider. should i make it less noticeable?

Try and find a model and just photoshop the before and after

 

[greynathan]

facebook ads. so u think the issue is the domain or the website itself being "generic"

you can get a clean domain for about $5 a year

 

[zenox]

You just got a random ai to make your website not like old niggas are gonna tell so passable

no, i just slaved my ass off making this so dont tell me this shit is an ai generated website

 

[zenox]

you can get a clean domain for about $5 a year

will do, thanks. ideally before the fb ads

 

[zenox]

Try and find a model and just photoshop the before and after

good idea, ill find some niche female model headshots and only slightly morph into somewhat realistic results

 

[greynathan]

will do, thanks. ideally before the fb ads

i would recommend namecheap, dont skimp out on the user becuase theres gonna be hella squatters

 

[esoterik]

looks like every other ai genned site, at least use fable w/ skills to make it look somewhat unique

 

[Notcel]

How’d you set it up, I might want to dropship somethings aswell

 

[zenox]

looks like every other ai genned site, at least use fable w/ skills to make it look somewhat unique

i made this site myself using the "shrine" template on shopify, so its not ai generated. show me a site that looks similar to this that is AI generated. and shrine isnt some cheap shitty template, its 149 USD.

 

[zenox]

How’d you set it up, I might want to dropship somethings aswell

I started basically yesterday. honestly, u just make the website as best asa you can, run the ads wherever relevant, and dropship off of alibaba, cjdropshipping theres a lot of other suppliers if you just search on tiktok for 5 minutes you'll find tons. just dont pick some shitty electronics niche

 

[zenox]

how does eleonskincare.com sound

i would recommend namecheap, dont skimp out on the user becuase theres gonna be hella squatters

 

[greynathan]

how does eleonskincare.com sound

fantastic, use that

 

[zenox]

fantastic, use that

buying it rn

 

[Carder]

as a creative strategist your site isnt confusing for the customer, at least at first sight, if you need help with the ads i can help, also would be better to get your own domain but for the starting its just fine like this, if you need help with overall marketing and performance or strat im here

 

[zenox]

as a creative strategist your site isnt confusing for the customer, at least at first sight, if you need help with the ads i can help, also would be better to get your own domain but for the starting its just fine like this, if you need help with overall marketing and performance or strat im here

yes thanks a lot man, rn im figuring out the domain i was just thinking im 17 right so shopify wont butcher me alive if they find out right? because i started making some good money on ebay as well before they absolutely fucked me over and took all my money etc. etc.

 

[Carder]

yes thanks a lot man, rn im figuring out the domain i was just thinking im 17 right so shopify wont butcher me alive if they find out right? because i started making some good money on ebay as well before they absolutely fucked me over and took all my money etc. etc.

shopify no, but your payment processors yeah maybe not asap at your first order but soon will ask your VAT number to verify data for you to be able to cashout and grant customers a safe purchase, also make backups in future of the payment processors

 

[zenox]

shopify no, but your payment processors yeah maybe not asap at your first order but soon will ask your VAT number to verify data for you to be able to cashout and grant customers a safe purchase, also make backups in future of the payment processors

idek if i got a vat number. but im starting to realise i have to be very careful right now, or i am going to get lifetime banned on shopify. apparently they will ask me for my ID as soon as the first sale comes in. and if they do that, its over, and if ur saying use a fake id, it doesnt work.

 

[Carder]

idek if i got a vat number. but im starting to realise i have to be very careful right now, or i am going to get lifetime banned on shopify. apparently they will ask me for my ID as soon as the first sale comes in. and if they do that, its over, and if ur saying use a fake id, it doesnt work.

yeah since its not a payment processor i hope they wont ask for your id asap, in case they do dont panic and ask your parents or someone you trust and use its id, you probably dont have a vat number since its needed a business consultant to open most times unless you do it on your own

 

[greynathan]

idek if i got a vat number. but im starting to realise i have to be very careful right now, or i am going to get lifetime banned on shopify. apparently they will ask me for my ID as soon as the first sale comes in. and if they do that, its over, and if ur saying use a fake id, it doesnt work.

you should try stripe, the rates are lower

 

[Carder]

you should try stripe, the rates are lower

stripe its just a payment processor

 

[zenox]

you should try stripe, the rates are lower

how does that help me get around being under 18, which is my biggest problem rn. otherwise i wouldve gone right ahead thank god i remembered now tbh

 

[Carder]

how does that help me get around being under 18, which is my biggest problem rn. otherwise i wouldve gone right ahead thank god i remembered now tbh

shopify unless it gets flagged shouldnt ask for your documents on the first fullfilled order

 

[zenox]

yeah since its not a payment processor i hope they wont ask for your id asap, in case they do dont panic and ask your parents or someone you trust and use its id, you probably dont have a vat number since its needed a business consultant to open most times unless you do it on your own

fuckk man i know theyre gonna ask for my ID thoughhh ive done this shit before and then you cant even use someone elses because it has to match the payment name on file etc and im only 3 months away from 18 but i cant wait any longer my situation is so shit.

 

[greynathan]

stripe its just a payment processor

yes and that removes the need for shopify 3% tax

 

[zenox]

shopify unless it gets flagged shouldnt ask for your documents on the first fullfilled order

are you sure? because im pretty sure even if its not on my first, once i make a certain amount of money, they 100000% will and then lock up my funds like ebay did

 

[zenox]

yes and that removes the need for shopify 3% tax

and doesnt fix my biggest hindrance stopping me from making the money i need

 

[Carder]

fuckk man i know theyre gonna ask for my ID thoughhh ive done this shit before and then you cant even use someone elses because it has to match the payment name on file etc and im only 3 months away from 18 but i cant wait any longer my situation is so shit.

give it a try if they lock you, just call the support once you turn 18, if you got money to spend in test for ads you should be fine

 

[Carder]

yes and that removes the need for shopify 3% tax

• Stripe Standard: 2.9% + 30¢ for online transactions; 2.7% + 5¢ for in-person transactions.

• Shopify Basic Plan: 2.9% + 30¢ for online transactions; 2.6% + 10¢ for in-person transactions.

 

[Carder]

are you sure? because im pretty sure even if its not on my first, once i make a certain amount of money, they 100000% will and then lock up my funds like ebay did

you already know you gonna print that much?

 

[zenox]

give it a try if they lock you, just call the support once you turn 18, if you got money to spend in test for ads you should be fine

yeah, im gonna try take some precautions though i realised i cant just blindly jump in right now. thanks though, and ill definitely reach out to you in regards to marketing soon.

 

[greynathan]

• Stripe Standard: 2.9% + 30¢ for online transactions; 2.7% + 5¢ for in-person transactions.
• Shopify Basic Plan: 2.9% + 30¢ for online transactions; 2.6% + 10¢ for in-person transactions.

nevermind I was wrong, I thought there was a larger tax on top of that

 

[Carder]

yeah, im gonna try take some precautions though i realised i cant just blindly jump in right now. thanks though, and ill definitely reach out to you in regards to marketing soon.

goodluck bud, its a big move the one you'll make, sure for anything if you get that big just delegate the marketing to me and i'll take care of it

 

[Carder]

nevermind I was wrong, I thought there was a larger tax on top of that

its okie

 

[zenox]

you already know you gonna print that much?

if i run FB ads targeted at the right age range for this product, an "anti-aging" miracle cream, its gonna be like liquid gold to those poor souls. and where there is demand, these people also have tons of money to spend on shit like this in hopes of preserving their youthful appearance. if i fail im a fucking useless retard

 

[Carder]

if i run FB ads targeted at the right age range for this product, an "anti-aging" miracle cream, its gonna be like liquid gold to those poor souls. and where there is demand, these people also have tons of money to spend on shit like this in hopes of preserving their youthful appearance. if i fail im a fucking useless retard

if you fail just analyze what was wrong, funnel? vsl? site? then adjust, the real money that come from ecom is when you have something that could get sold for good liquid cash to some private funds

 

[mrr]

ib4 sued to death by Big Pharma because clients face starts peeling clean off their faces due to a cream made in Lahore inside an uranium cell factory

 

[muragoat]

bump

the gmail email absolutely rack the reputation
same for website name

 

[Reformed]

I think the product itself is cope but maybe it’s cus I’m biased and I can’t imagine anyone taking skincare shi like that seriously

 

[_hvd_]

from a first glance it looks good

are you kitty from nutria?

 

[iblamezyg0s]

ELÉON

Transform your daily skincare ritual with ELÉON Renewal Cream—a luxurious moisturiser formulated to support healthier, smoother, and more radiant-looking skin.

eleonskincare.myshopify.com

any honest advice would be appreciated, i would like to know how this looks to others because I'm of course biased towards overestimating the extent to which my store has a potentially high-conversion rate.

and i know org isnt the ideal place to ask, but its 1am rn and i really wanna just launch the ads

Mirin. It looks simple and trusted. Can you send me the insta or tiktok of the brand cuz i wanna see how the marketing phase goes.