rate piece of music i wrote

[MagaPutinism]

 

[Deleted member 18849]

If x your looks score out of 10 (x/10), and y your music score out of 10 (y/10), then x=y.

 

[MagaPutinism]

If x your looks score out of 10 (x/10), and y your music score out of 10 (y/10), then x=y.

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[john2]

Lacks counterpoint, no harmonies (let alone interesting ones), the melodic framework is repeated too often, the melodies have no unique rhythm in them... just feels like it needs some pause somwhere i need some space in the middle to breathe while listening to each melodic phrase. But for some reason the opening phrase isn't even resolved properly. Heck even the end of your little piece of music doesn't have a solid cadence.

You didn't put much effort into this, I can tell.