Rate the ascension

[itssonotoverbro]

Rate me before and after and also give me tips on how to further improve.
17yo before
18yo now

Same phone btw

 

[itssonotoverbro]

Bump

 

[abzz!]

bud grew the sides of his hair and cleared his skin up

kinda underwhelming for an "ascension" post

each to their own tho

 

[itssonotoverbro]

bud grew the sides of his hair and cleared his skin up

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kinda underwhelming for an "ascension" post

each to their own tho

Maybe "ascension" was the wrong term. Still, I don't think its just the hair and skin. I thought by adding an older picture people could get a better perspective.
How do you think I can improve further?