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[Nautica]

This is the theme of for one of the places in my story. Does it sound professional or can you tell its amateurish? Its not the first song I've "written" but it is the first one I've recorded and finished. If you guys think its good I plan on making a youtube channel, but ill get no views anyways.

 

[Nisse]

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This is the theme of for one of the places in my story. Does it sound professional or can you tell its amateurish? Its not the first song I've "written" but it is the first one I've recorded and finished. If you guys think its good I plan on making a youtube channel, but ill get no views anyways.

Sounds psychedelic, like pink floyd

 

[turkproducer]

nice vibes. was this all recorded with your own instruments, or did you produce it on a computer

it sounds computerised to me. you have a nice base melody and sound, but the song progression isn’t there at all and the guitar notes clash with each other later on.

 

[Nautica]

nice vibes. was this all recorded with your own instruments, or did you produce it on a computer

it sounds computerised to me. you have a nice base melody and sound, but the song progression isn’t there at all and the guitar notes clash with each other later on.

Yeah the synth parts are computerized like the aquatic effects, the choir and chime in the beginning and the drums. The main melody and bass, I did with my guitar. I'll make sure the notes dont clash in my next song and that the progression is better

 

[turkproducer]

Yeah the synth parts are computerized like the aquatic effects, the choir and chime in the beginning and the drums. The main melody and bass, I did with my guitar. I'll make sure the notes dont clash in my next song and that the progression is better

i like the way you responded, it seems that bit under your name is legit about the ego!

if you ever want any help/advice or thoughts you can PM me, i don’t rly do this shit anymore but have some experience. it is refreshing to see you play instruments too

 

[Nautica]

i like the way you responded, it seems that bit under your name is legit about the ego!

if you ever want any help/advice or thoughts you can PM me, i don’t rly do this shit anymore but have some experience. it is refreshing to see you play instruments too

Yeah man, cant ever improve without any criticism. You play music? What instruments? You have any samples?

 

[Ponder]

nice vibes. was this all recorded with your own instruments, or did you produce it on a computer

it sounds computerised to me. you have a nice base melody and sound, but the song progression isn’t there at all and the guitar notes clash with each other later on.

Mind giving me feedback on my song too?

 

[turkproducer]

Mind giving me feedback on my song too?

Yes PM me bud

 

[brainded]

Where’s the adlibs and the 808s

 

[Nautica]

Where’s the adlibs and the 808s

I only do instrumentals, no adlibs or lyrics. I was going to add a rhthym drum part into it, but my drum presets suck and werent fitting in well so I scrapped it.

 

[Deleted member 8576]

good

 

[Nautica]

good

thanks bro

 

[ReverseNorwoodPill]

 

[Deleted member 9819]

sounds good tbh, reminds me of the ghost recon wildland ost

 

[Deleted member 4612]

i really liked the very beginning. decent overall

 

[Deleted member 3591]

The beginning reminds me of the pre breakdown in Loathe - New Faces in the Dark

 

[Nautica]

The beginning reminds me of the pre breakdown in Loathe - New Faces in the Dark

Thanks for name dropping that song, gonna see if i cant find an instrumental of it.