rate this poem i just made

[Deleted member 6305]

I went far far across the sea past soundless desert sub-realities
A gentle breeze was flowing through so soft and subtly
I stopped to take the late sunshine before the warm light ceased
I would not rest for some time on my journey to the East
Peace is what I have come searching for Spiritual comfort, thoughts far from those of war
And then I went on with my pilgrimage to find the home of light
I traveled on for quite a while until late in the night It seemed that
I moved time and space like scenes in some fine play
And all beings seemed to welcome me as I went on my way
I saw things that were far removed from what I thought was true
And then I knew I’d come upon the soul’s home and its youth
Peace is what I have come searching for Spiritual comfort, thoughts far from those of war
I woke up in a daze from deep within and then my vision ceased
That is the way I came upon my journey to the East

 

[Deleted member 1476]

nice man

@Over as our poet laureate what do you think

 

[Pietrosiek]

didnt read, im sorry man, but i will leave bumotivation

 

[Over]

nice man

@Over as our poet laureate what do you think

HEAREST MY VOICE THOU STILL?

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