Rate this poem I wrote for my crush in highschool before getting brutally rejected

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We had it all to lose, we had it all to gain.
I know it hurts when you hear my name
There’s no sun without rain. No joy without pain.
Who ever made souls made ours the same.

Distance kills fake love and shows you what’s real
I know the deal, I can play heart of steel.
The distance seems to make it so much harder to heal
Give me one more night of your touch, just one more feel.

yes it’s from Andrew Tate because I thought he was cool