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Franklin:
  • Male Body Type: Lean, athletic, muscular.
  • Male Height: Tall.
  • Personality: Charming, flirtatious, and confident. He sweeps you off your feet.
  • Friends: Gets along with others, especially his girlfriend Idalia.

Idalia:
  • Female Body Type: Voluptuous and curvy, with a well-defined hourglass figure.
  • Female Height: Average for women.
  • Personality: Powerful and commanding, leaves a lasting impression with a touch of grace.
  • Friends: Bonds with other moggers, hates subhumans.

Jova:
  • Height: 5'6"
  • MBTI: ENFP
  • Enneagram: Type 7 (The Enthusiast)
  • Personality: Jova is cheerful and thrives on new experiences. She has the ability to adapt and thrive in changing circumstances.
  • Body Type: Chubby with a tiny waist

Margot:
  • Female Body Type: No tits, no ass, skinny-fit.
  • Female Height: Average for women.
  • Personality: Hypergamous and selective, always looking for something more. She's the hurricane with a wandering eye.
  • Friends: Has her sights set on Lee, rejects Nigel's advances.
Nigel:
  • Male Body Type: Average build.
  • Male Height: Average for men.
  • Personality: Loyal and persistent, but not quite what Margot is searching for. He's left in the friend zone.
  • Friends: Seeking Margot's affection but finding it unrequited.
Lee:
  • Male Body Type: Bodybuilder, with a sculpted physique.
  • Male Height: Tall.
  • Personality: Mysterious, intense, and unpredictable. No woman can resist him, but they're never quite sure what he'll do next.
  • Friends: Forms a deep connection with Jova.

Lee and Jova: Long-Distance Romance Across the Continent
Lee, a charming and magnetic individual from Martha's Vineyard, shared a profound connection with Jova, someone located in the far reaches of Isla Vista. Their relationship was one of a kind, bridging the gap across a continent through the realm of online dating. Lee found comfort and companionship in Jova, who provided a fresh and unique perspective on life. They shared personal stories and whispered sweet nothings in the universal language of love.

Margot's Crush on Lee: Unrequited Love
Margot, a gentle and passionate soul, couldn’t hide her feelings for Lee. She was captivated by his charisma and strength, consistently trying to be a part of his life in the hopes of garnering his attention. However, Lee was completely enamored with Jova, and remained unaware of Margot’s affections. Margot’s love for Lee was as deep and intense as the ocean, yet it was not reciprocated.

Nigel's Interest in Margot: Unanswered Affections
Nigel, a resilient and earnest individual, had feelings for Margot. He admired her passion and tenacity, and found himself drawn to her. Despite his subtle efforts to capture her heart, Margot was fixated on Lee. Nigel’s feelings were left unanswered, as he navigated the turbulent waves of unrequited love, hoping Margot would someday recognize his affection.

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Margot, in this narrative, displays tendencies of seeking relationships with those she perceives as having a higher status. She is attracted to individuals who appear more prestigious or desirable, often ignoring those who genuinely care for her. Despite Nigel's sincere affection, Margot constantly seeks validation from people like Lee, whom she believes to be of a higher standing.

Her behavior leads her to pursue Lee, who is already in a relationship with Jova. Margot thinks that being associated with Lee, who has a connection to a different state, would elevate her own social standing. She is willing to go to great lengths, even intruding on his relationship with Jova, in her pursuit of his attention.

Margot’s tendencies create tension and drama among the characters, as they observe her relentless chase for status and validation, often at the cost of genuine emotional connections.

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- With Jova residing in Isla Vista and Lee in Martha's Vineyard, they maintain their relationship through online dating, constantly communicating across the vast distance. Their love breaks barriers, as they share their lives and emotions through digital connections.

- Margot, still harboring feelings for Lee, becomes overly obsessive, closely monitoring their online interactions and attempting to involve herself in their conversations. Her actions grow increasingly intrusive, creating unease and tension among the characters.

- Meanwhile, Idalia finds herself irresistibly attracted to Franklin’s perfect physique and charming demeanor. Their relationship is passionate and intense, with Idalia constantly seeking Franklin’s affection, and their undeniable chemistry setting the stage for a fervent romance.
 
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Like I said, good concept, but try and give some flesh to the frame by formatting it as a more traditional story.
Think it over and see how it goes.
 
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Like I said, good concept, but try and give some flesh to the frame by formatting it as a more traditional story.
Think it over and see how it goes.
Thank you! How could I make it a more traditional story?
It's just the synposis.
 
Thank you! How could I make it a more traditional story?
It's just the synposis.
Give it a beginning, climax, and a good ending (could leave as a cliffhanger)
Try research other romance novels for inspiration.
 
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We need part 2 brah!
 
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Lee and Jova: Long-Distance Romance Across the Continent
Lee, a charming and magnetic individual from Martha's Vineyard, shared a profound connection with Jova, someone located in the far reaches of Isla Vista. Their relationship was one of a kind, bridging the gap across a continent through the realm of online dating. Lee found comfort and companionship in Jova, who provided a fresh and unique perspective on life. They shared personal stories and whispered sweet nothings in the universal language of love.

Margot's Crush on Lee: Unrequited Love
Margot, a gentle and passionate soul, couldn’t hide her feelings for Lee. She was captivated by his charisma and strength, consistently trying to be a part of his life in the hopes of garnering his attention. However, Lee was completely enamored with Jova, and remained unaware of Margot’s affections. Margot’s love for Lee was as deep and intense as the ocean, yet it was not reciprocated.

Nigel's Interest in Margot: Unanswered Affections
Nigel, a resilient and earnest individual, had feelings for Margot. He admired her passion and tenacity, and found himself drawn to her. Despite his subtle efforts to capture her heart, Margot was fixated on Lee. Nigel’s feelings were left unanswered, as he navigated the turbulent waves of unrequited love, hoping Margot would someday recognize his affection.

------

Margot, in this narrative, displays tendencies of seeking relationships with those she perceives as having a higher status. She is attracted to individuals who appear more prestigious or desirable, often ignoring those who genuinely care for her. Despite Nigel's sincere affection, Margot constantly seeks validation from people like Lee, whom she believes to be of a higher standing.

Her behavior leads her to pursue Lee, who is already in a relationship with Jova. Margot thinks that being associated with Lee, who has a connection to a different state, would elevate her own social standing. She is willing to go to great lengths, even intruding on his relationship with Jova, in her pursuit of his attention.

Margot’s tendencies create tension and drama among the characters, as they observe her relentless chase for status and validation, often at the cost of genuine emotional connections.

------

- With Jova residing in Isla Vista and Lee in Martha's Vineyard, they maintain their relationship through online dating, constantly communicating across the vast distance. Their love breaks barriers, as they share their lives and emotions through digital connections.

- Margot, still harboring feelings for Lee, becomes overly obsessive, closely monitoring their online interactions and attempting to involve herself in their conversations. Her actions grow increasingly intrusive, creating unease and tension among the characters.

- Meanwhile, Idalia finds herself irresistibly attracted to Franklin’s perfect physique and charming demeanor. Their relationship is passionate and intense, with Idalia constantly seeking Franklin’s affection, and their undeniable chemistry setting the stage for a fervent romance.
Read it to your fiance and start exotic dancing
 
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Give it a beginning, climax, and a good ending (could leave as a cliffhanger)
Try research other romance novels for inspiration.
Yes!!

 
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Franklin:
  • Male Body Type: Lean, athletic, muscular.
  • Male Height: Tall.
  • Personality: Charming, flirtatious, and confident. He sweeps you off your feet.
  • Friends: Gets along with others, especially his girlfriend Idalia.

Idalia:
  • Female Body Type: Voluptuous and curvy, with a well-defined hourglass figure.
  • Female Height: Average for women.
  • Personality: Powerful and commanding, leaves a lasting impression with a touch of grace.
  • Friends: Bonds with other moggers, hates subhumans.

Jova:
  • Height: 5'6"
  • MBTI: ENFP
  • Enneagram: Type 7 (The Enthusiast)
  • Personality: Jova is cheerful and thrives on new experiences. She has the ability to adapt and thrive in changing circumstances.
  • Body Type: Chubby with a tiny waist

Margot:
  • Female Body Type: No tits, no ass, skinny-fit.
  • Female Height: Average for women.
  • Personality: Hypergamous and selective, always looking for something more. She's the hurricane with a wandering eye.
  • Friends: Has her sights set on Lee, rejects Nigel's advances.
Nigel:
  • Male Body Type: Average build.
  • Male Height: Average for men.
  • Personality: Loyal and persistent, but not quite what Margot is searching for. He's left in the friend zone.
  • Friends: Seeking Margot's affection but finding it unrequited.
Lee:
  • Male Body Type: Bodybuilder, with a sculpted physique.
  • Male Height: Tall.
  • Personality: Mysterious, intense, and unpredictable. No woman can resist him, but they're never quite sure what he'll do next.
  • Friends: Forms a deep connection with Jova.

Otis:
  • Body Type: Sturdy and robust, with a towering presence.
  • Appearance: A white hilbilly
  • Height: Taller than most, standing out in a crowd.
  • Personality: Confident and unyielding, Otis made a grand entrance when he went ER in Acapulco because he's a GOP supporter who hates ethnic people. He's the type of person who commands attention with his sheer strength and determination.
  • Enemies: Ethnic people, women (he beats up Jova for no reason in particular)
 
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Franklin:
  • Male Body Type: Muscular.
  • Male Height: Tall.
  • Personality: Charming, flirtatious, and confident. He sweeps you off your feet.
  • Friends: Gets along with others, especially his girlfriend Idalia.

Idalia:
  • Female Body Type: Voluptuous and curvy, with a well-defined hourglass figure.
  • Female Height: Average for women.
  • Personality: Powerful and commanding, leaves a lasting impression with a touch of grace.
  • Friends: Bonds with other moggers, hates subhumans.

Jova:
  • Height: 5'6"
  • MBTI: ENFP
  • Enneagram: Type 7 (The Enthusiast)
  • Personality: Jova is cheerful and thrives on new experiences. She has the ability to adapt and thrive in changing circumstances.
  • Body Type: Chubby with a tiny waist

Margot:
  • Female Body Type: No tits, no ass, skinny-fit.
  • Female Height: Average for women.
  • Personality: Hypergamous and selective, always looking for something more. She's the hurricane with a wandering eye.
  • Friends: Has her sights set on Lee, rejects Nigel's advances.
Nigel:
  • Male Body Type: Average build.
  • Male Height: Average for men.
  • Personality: Loyal and persistent, but not quite what Margot is searching for. He's left in the friend zone.
  • Friends: Seeking Margot's affection but finding it unrequited.
Lee:
  • Male Body Type: Bodybuilder, with a sculpted physique.
  • Male Height: Tall.
  • Personality: Mysterious, intense, and unpredictable. No woman can resist him, but they're never quite sure what he'll do next.
  • Friends: Forms a deep connection with Jova.
Nigga is making tsunami ocs
 
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Get outta this forum immideatly
Don't worry, I'm mainly here for shits and giggles, as well as talking to a few friends.
I'm not gonna get blackpilled.
Appreciate the concern though.
 
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Don't worry, I'm mainly here for shits and giggles, as well as talking to a few friends.
I'm not gonna get blackpilled.
Appreciate the concern though.
no worries but please take it easy.
 
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@aspiringexcel



Franklin:
  • Male Body Type: Lean, athletic, muscular.
  • Male Height: Tall.
  • Personality: Charming, flirtatious, and confident. He sweeps you off your feet.
  • Friends: Gets along with others, especially his girlfriend Idalia.

Idalia:
  • Female Body Type: Voluptuous and curvy, with a well-defined hourglass figure.
  • Female Height: Average for women.
  • Personality: Powerful and commanding, leaves a lasting impression with a touch of grace.
  • Friends: Bonds with other moggers, hates subhumans.

Jova:
  • Height: 5'6"
  • MBTI: ENFP
  • Enneagram: Type 7 (The Enthusiast)
  • Personality: Jova is cheerful and thrives on new experiences. She has the ability to adapt and thrive in chan
Margot:
  • Female Body Type: No tits, no ass, skinny-fit.
  • Female Height: Average for women.
  • Personality: Hypergamous and selective, always looking for something more. She's the hurricane with a wandering eye.
  • Friends: Has her sights set on Lee, rejects Nigel's advances.
Nigel:
  • Male Body Type: Average build.
  • Male Height: Average for men.
  • Personality: Loyal and persistent, but not quite what Margot is searching for. He's left in the friend zone.
  • Friends: Seeking Margot's affection but finding it unrequited.
Lee:
  • Male Body Type: Bodybuilder, with a sculpted physique.
  • Male Height: Tall.
  • Personality: Mysterious, intense, and unpredictable. No woman can resist him, but they're never quite sure what he'll do next.
  • Friends: Forms a deep connection with Jo
@Average Aryan
@aspiringexcel



Franklin:
  • Male Body Type: Lean, athletic, muscular.
  • Male Height: Tall.
  • Personality: Charming, flirtatious, and confident. He sweeps you off your feet.
  • Friends: Gets along with others, especially his girlfriend Idalia.

Idalia:
  • Female Body Type: Voluptuous and curvy, with a well-defined hourglass figure.
  • Female Height: Average for women.
  • Personality: Powerful and commanding, leaves a lasting impression with a touch of grace.
  • Friends: Bonds with other moggers, hates subhumans.

Jova:
  • Height: 5'6"
  • MBTI: ENFP
  • Enneagram: Type 7 (The Enthusiast)
  • Personality: Jova is cheerful and thrives on new experiences. She has the ability to adapt and thrive in changing circumstances.
  • Body Type: Chubby with a tiny waist

Margot:
  • Female Body Type: No tits, no ass, skinny-fit.
  • Female Height: Average for women.
  • Personality: Hypergamous and selective, always looking for something more. She's the hurricane with a wandering eye.
  • Friends: Has her sights set on Lee, rejects Nigel's advances.
Nigel:
  • Male Body Type: Average build.
  • Male Height: Average for men.
  • Personality: Loyal and persistent, but not quite what Margot is searching for. He's left in the friend zone.
  • Friends: Seeking Margot's affection but finding it unrequited.
Lee:
  • Male Body Type: Bodybuilder, with a sculpted physique.
  • Male Height: Tall.
  • Personality: Mysterious, intense, and unpredictable. No woman can resist him, but they're never quite sure what he'll do next.
  • Friends: Forms a deep connection with Jova.
Cool and interesting shit fr gotta feel bad for Nigel tho D:
 
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I'm not gonna get blackpilled.
thats what they all say

one advice kiddo, LEAVE before the curse gets you
the blackpill is a curse, the only people who don"t get the curse are dumb people

L E A V E

wolf GIF
 
thats what they all say

one advice kiddo, LEAVE before the curse gets you
the blackpill is a curse, the only people who don"t get the curse are dumb people

L E A V E

wolf GIF
thoughts on my story synposis and characters?
 
What do you think would happen with Nigel and Margot?
Idk maybe something like Margot and Lee getting togheter and Nigel and Jova getting togheter and fucking em ovah!!
 
good synposis and characters man, keep going
Thanks bhai, thoughts on the characters themselves and your favourites?

I've done Otis!

Otis:

Body Type: Sturdy and robust, with a towering presence.
Appearance: A white hilbilly
Height: Taller than most, standing out in a crowd.
Personality: Confident and unyielding, Otis made a grand entrance when he went ER in Acapulco because he's a GOP supporter who hates ethnic people. He's the type of person who commands attention with his sheer strength and determination.
Enemies: Ethnic people, women (he beats up Jova for no reason in particular)
 
Idk maybe something like Margot and Lee getting togheter and Nigel and Jova getting togheter and fucking em ovah!!

Otis:

Body Type: Sturdy and robust, with a towering presence.
Appearance: A white hilbilly
Height: Taller than most, standing out in a crowd.
Personality: Confident and unyielding, Otis made a grand entrance when he went ER in Acapulco because he's a GOP supporter who hates ethnic people. He's the type of person who commands attention with his sheer strength and determination.
Enemies: Ethnic people, women (he beats up Jova for no reason in particular)

Rate this character
 
Lmao 3/10 for the confidence and height!
Poor jova..
 
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Otis

Getting beaten up D:
Yes, Otis is a misogynist and hates Jova for no valid reason
whenever he sees her, he beats her up
 
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Hmmm...... margot must bow to otis
 
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Hmmm...... martha must bow to otis
@Average Aryan
@aspiringexcel



Franklin:
  • Male Body Type: Lean, athletic, muscular.
  • Male Height: Tall.
  • Personality: Charming, flirtatious, and confident. He sweeps you off your feet.
  • Friends: Gets along with others, especially his girlfriend Idalia.

Idalia:
  • Female Body Type: Voluptuous and curvy, with a well-defined hourglass figure.
  • Female Height: Average for women.
  • Personality: Powerful and commanding, leaves a lasting impression with a touch of grace.
  • Friends: Bonds with other moggers, hates subhumans.

Jova:
  • Height: 5'6"
  • MBTI: ENFP
  • Enneagram: Type 7 (The Enthusiast)
  • Personality: Jova is cheerful and thrives on new experiences. She has the ability to adapt and thrive in changing circumstances.
  • Body Type: Chubby with a tiny waist

Margot:
  • Female Body Type: No tits, no ass, skinny-fit.
  • Female Height: Average for women.
  • Personality: Hypergamous and selective, always looking for something more. She's the hurricane with a wandering eye.
  • Friends: Has her sights set on Lee, rejects Nigel's advances.
Nigel:
  • Male Body Type: Average build.
  • Male Height: Average for men.
  • Personality: Loyal and persistent, but not quite what Margot is searching for. He's left in the friend zone.
  • Friends: Seeking Margot's affection but finding it unrequited.
Lee:
  • Male Body Type: Bodybuilder, with a sculpted physique.
  • Male Height: Tall.
  • Personality: Mysterious, intense, and unpredictable. No woman can resist him, but they're never quite sure what he'll do next.
  • Friends: Forms a deep connection with Jova.

Otis:
  • Body Type: Sturdy and robust, with a towering presence.
  • Appearance: A white hilbilly
  • Height: Taller than most, standing out in a crowd.
  • Personality: Confident and unyielding, Otis made a grand entrance when he went ER in Acapulco because he's a GOP supporter who hates ethnic people. He's the type of person who commands attention with his sheer strength and determination.
  • Enemies: Ethnic people, women (he beats up Jova for no reason in particular)
 
Otis a hillbilly? REEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE OTIS IS A CHAD, DESTROYER OF CHICANOS
 
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AI generated
 
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I'm not reading that.
 
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Cuz I'm dumb and fucking ugly man.

I don't need to read about some dumbass hurricanes that get more action than me.
Not hurricane s
 
 
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