The infinite night ( love poem )

[Narcissus🥀]

I know that the sun is not hot
Nor the stars are bright
For me when I see into your eyes
I feel all the fire and light

Let us lie under the blanket of the night.

And as I feel your soft breasts and kiss your warm shoulders, you will understand how my love can move mountains and break boulders.
We came from ashes and to ashes we will return, our inevitable, but let's enjoy life while it's still our turn.

I wish it could last forever, but on second thought,
an eternity with you would pass in a minute,
so let's not give it any thought,
and pray that the night becomes infinite.





Short poem I made.
Will definitely make a long one next time
@kebab @WishIwasChico @yeeyeeslayer @try2beme @Clavicular @MoggerGaston

 

[Deleted member 57356]

arent poems supposed to rhyme?

 

[Clavicular]

arent poems supposed to rhyme?

Average illiterate

 

[6"4 Tyrone(I'm not)]

I know that the sun is not hot
Nor the stars are bright
For me when I see into your eyes
I feel all the fire and light

Let us lie under the blanket of the night.

And as I feel your soft breasts and kiss your warm shoulders, you will understand how my love can move mountains and break boulders.
We came from ashes and to ashes we will return, our inevitable, but let's enjoy life while it's still our turn.

I wish it could last forever, but on second thought,
an eternity with you would pass in a minute,
so let's not give it any thought,
and pray that the night becomes infinite.





Short poem I made.
Will definitely make a long one next time
@kebab @WishIwasChico @yeeyeeslayer @try2beme @Clavicular @MoggerGaston

My brain was hurting while reading this

 

[Deleted member 57356]

Average illiterate

it sounds terrible man
cant make it sounds pleasant

 

[future_darktriad000]

arent poems supposed to rhyme?

No. Ofc its more pleasurable while reading when it rhymes but Poetry doesnt rly have "rules"

 

[Vermilioncore]

For when the hour comes
When the body is to cross
And the heart begins it’s trek
down the corridor of loss

 

[rteme]

You

it sounds terrible man
cant make it sounds pleasant

Ur retarded