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i’ll start this off by saying i will admit the truth, im ungrateful for that of which i have, this unquenchable itching i have towards the pondering of my own tragic life

i think i’m some sort of martyr, some scapegoat
sent out into the wilderness, tainted by sin not of my own doing

some tragic poet, a innocent soul driven into the very wastes and landfills

Im not the protagonist of anything other than my life, surely had i been the centerpiece of a book or movie

It would’ve been a tragedy
my s GIF



My soul is clean and pure, innocent and virgin.


The young affluent handsome intelligent athletic sensitive boy has nowhere to go

for everywhere he may go all he will see is a torn wasteland,
a landfill ridden with corpses,
corpses which do not decay,
corpses that may walk,
may talk,
may blink,
may smile,
may even have a heartbeat should you press your ear against their chest

yet all he sees are corpses, the precious boy is alone, he is lonely, and he is aware of this

so the precious young boy searches and searches, only to be mistaken yet he dig through piles of corpses and cadavers

only to be mistaken, for he pour his soul out, for he put a piece of himself in the fire, maybe the smoke will bring another to thyself

the precious boy is sad and sullen, as the puzzle piece so intricately carved may not have a pair, for the machine might’ve broken or for his union be far away he may not find it,

even if the young boy searches countless days and countless nights
countless springs
countless summers
countless autumns
countless winters

he may not be successful even then, the precious boy knows this yet he hopes,
the young boy hopes and dreams
 
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i’ll start this off by saying i will admit the truth, im ungrateful for that of which i have, this unquenchable itching i have towards the pondering of my own tragic life

i think i’m some sort of martyr, some scapegoat
sent out into the wilderness, tainted by sin not of my own doing

some tragic poet, a innocent soul driven into the very wastes and landfills

Im not the protagonist of anything other than my life, surely had i been the centerpiece of a book or movie

It would’ve been a tragedy
my s GIF



My soul is clean and pure, innocent and virgin.


The young affluent handsome intelligent athletic sensitive boy has nowhere to go

for everywhere he may go all he will see is a torn wasteland,
a landfill ridden with corpses,
corpses which do not decay,
corpses that may walk,
may talk,
may blink,
may smile,
may even have a heartbeat should you press your ear against their chest

yet all he sees are corpses, the precious boy is alone, he is lonely, and he is aware of this

so the precious young boy searches and searches, only to be mistaken yet he dig through piles of corpses and cadavers

only to be mistaken, for he pour his soul out, for he put a piece of himself in the fire, maybe the smoke will bring another to thyself

the precious boy is sad and sullen, as the puzzle piece so intricately carved may not have a pair, for the machine might’ve broken or for his union be far away he may not find it,

even if the young boy searches countless days and countless nights
countless springs
countless summers
countless autumns
countless winters

he may not be successful even then, the precious boy knows this yet he hopes,
the young boy hopes and dreams

Truly magnificent. Hope you all the best boyo!
 

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I did :lul: I like the countless section
i love you bhai

you gotta listen to the music while you read too

i always try to put music in my more creative threads so it can have a larger emotional impact
 
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Good read even though I didnt understand shit
 
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i’ll start this off by saying i will admit the truth, im ungrateful for that of which i have, this unquenchable itching i have towards the pondering of my own tragic life

i think i’m some sort of martyr, some scapegoat
sent out into the wilderness, tainted by sin not of my own doing

some tragic poet, a innocent soul driven into the very wastes and landfills

Im not the protagonist of anything other than my life, surely had i been the centerpiece of a book or movie

It would’ve been a tragedy
my s GIF



My soul is clean and pure, innocent and virgin.


The young affluent handsome intelligent athletic sensitive boy has nowhere to go

for everywhere he may go all he will see is a torn wasteland,
a landfill ridden with corpses,
corpses which do not decay,
corpses that may walk,
may talk,
may blink,
may smile,
may even have a heartbeat should you press your ear against their chest

yet all he sees are corpses, the precious boy is alone, he is lonely, and he is aware of this

so the precious young boy searches and searches, only to be mistaken yet he dig through piles of corpses and cadavers

only to be mistaken, for he pour his soul out, for he put a piece of himself in the fire, maybe the smoke will bring another to thyself

the precious boy is sad and sullen, as the puzzle piece so intricately carved may not have a pair, for the machine might’ve broken or for his union be far away he may not find it,

even if the young boy searches countless days and countless nights
countless springs
countless summers
countless autumns
countless winters

he may not be successful even then, the precious boy knows this yet he hopes,
the young boy hopes and dreams

ellie aint lettin u hit fo dis 😹🙏🥀
 
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Good read even though I didnt understand shit
how bro

i tried to tone down the riddles and artistica

what didn’t u understand i will gladly explain:feelsyay::feelswhere::feelsautistic:
 
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i love you bhai

you gotta listen to the music while you read too

i always try to put music in my more creative threads so it can have a larger emotional impact
The music added emotional depth to the thread, it was nice
 
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ellie aint lettin u hit fo dis 😹🙏🥀
nigga :lasereyes::lasereyes::lasereyes:

this is more a overall take on my life, she bashes me for having so many previous relationships, she doesn’t understand the suffering of the precious boy
 
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how bro

i tried to tone down the riddles and artistica

what didn’t u understand i will gladly explain:feelsyay::feelswhere::feelsautistic:
Everything please
 
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nigga :lasereyes::lasereyes::lasereyes:

this is more a overall take on my life, she bashes me for having so many previous relationships, she doesn’t understand the suffering of the precious boy
sensitive young man 🥀🚬🤙☝️
 
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i’ll start this off by saying i will admit the truth, im ungrateful for that of which i have, this unquenchable itching i have towards the pondering of my own tragic life

i think i’m some sort of martyr, some scapegoat
sent out into the wilderness, tainted by sin not of my own doing

some tragic poet, a innocent soul driven into the very wastes and landfills

Im not the protagonist of anything other than my life, surely had i been the centerpiece of a book or movie

It would’ve been a tragedy
my s GIF



My soul is clean and pure, innocent and virgin.


The young affluent handsome intelligent athletic sensitive boy has nowhere to go

for everywhere he may go all he will see is a torn wasteland,
a landfill ridden with corpses,
corpses which do not decay,
corpses that may walk,
may talk,
may blink,
may smile,
may even have a heartbeat should you press your ear against their chest

yet all he sees are corpses, the precious boy is alone, he is lonely, and he is aware of this

so the precious young boy searches and searches, only to be mistaken yet he dig through piles of corpses and cadavers

only to be mistaken, for he pour his soul out, for he put a piece of himself in the fire, maybe the smoke will bring another to thyself

the precious boy is sad and sullen, as the puzzle piece so intricately carved may not have a pair, for the machine might’ve broken or for his union be far away he may not find it,

even if the young boy searches countless days and countless nights
countless springs
countless summers
countless autumns
countless winters

he may not be successful even then, the precious boy knows this yet he hopes,
the young boy hopes and dreams

Sounds like this is about me:feelskek:
 
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Everything please


i’ll start this off by saying i will admit the truth, im ungrateful for that of which i have, this unquenchable itching i have towards the pondering of my own tragic life

i think i’m some sort of martyr, some scapegoat
sent out into the wilderness, tainted by sin not of my own doing

suffering because of a punishment which he did nothing to deserve
some tragic poet, a innocent soul driven into the very wastes and landfills

Im not the protagonist of anything other than my life, surely had i been the centerpiece of a book or movie

It would’ve been a tragedy
my s GIF



My soul is clean and pure, innocent and virgin.

the boys life is very sad and so comparable to a genre of books called “tragedies”

basically where sad stuff happens

The young affluent handsome intelligent athletic sensitive boy has nowhere to go

for everywhere he may go all he will see is a torn wasteland,
a landfill ridden with corpses,
corpses which do not decay,
corpses that may walk,
may talk,
may blink,
may smile,
may even have a heartbeat should you press your ear against their chest

yet all he sees are corpses, the precious boy is alone, he is lonely, and he is aware of this

so the precious young boy searches and searches, only to be mistaken yet he dig through piles of corpses and cadavers
the young boy sees a lot of people around him, but none seem genuinely

none are truly “alive”
only to be mistaken, for he pour his soul out, for he put a piece of himself in the fire, maybe the smoke will bring another to thyself

the precious boy is sad and sullen, as the puzzle piece so intricately carved may not have a pair, for the machine might’ve broken or for his union be far away he may not find it,
the puzzle piece is an analogy to the boy not having another piece that’s fit him

union is just another word for joining, meaning his match is far away or simply nonexistent
even if the young boy searches countless days and countless nights
countless springs
countless summers
countless autumns
countless winters
he searches for along time
he may not be successful even then, the precious boy knows this yet he hopes,
the young boy hopes and dreams
he knows he may never find his match but he keeps searching
 
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suffering because of a punishment which he did nothing to deserve


the boys life is very sad and so comparable to a genre of books called “tragedies”

basically where sad stuff happens


the young boy sees a lot of people around him, but none seem genuinely

none are truly “alive”

the puzzle piece is an analogy to the boy not having another piece that’s fit him

union is just another word for joining, meaning his match is far away or simply nonexistent

he searches for along time

he knows he may never find his match but he keeps searching
You should join some writing class, I think it would suit you
 
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Sounds like this is about me:feelskek:
i thought about you as i wrote this too, you did nothing wrong yet she still left you

The precious boy is more than just a singular person

he represents the tragic sadness that comes with the search of pure innocent love

even if the young precious boy gives all he has and does everything to the best of his ability

it will not be enough for the masses, for the corpses
 
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i thought about you as i wrote this too, you did nothing wrong yet she still left you

The precious boy is more than just a singular person

he represents the tragic sadness that comes with the search of pure innocent love

even if the young precious boy gives all he has and does everything to the best of his ability

it will not be enough for the masses, for the corpses
Truely a poet, bookmarked:love:.
 
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Me too man
what kinda music you listen to?

i’ve been really heavy an ambient and techno for so long

it fits emotions better i feel like since it doesn’t have lyrics

lyrics help deepen emotion only if you know the lyrics already, the average song

you can’t even understand the lyrics anymore, music like frank sinatra where you can clearly hear every word

that music doesn’t exist anymore
 
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what kinda music you listen to?

i’ve been really heavy an ambient and techno for so long

it fits emotions better i feel like since it doesn’t have lyrics

lyrics help deepen emotion only if you know the lyrics already, the average song

you can’t even understand the lyrics anymore, music like frank sinatra where you can clearly hear every word

that music doesn’t exist anymore
I listen to Sematary JFL :lul::lul: (underground normie “music”)

Do you listen to jazz? Ambient is nice
 
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i’ve always been into writing but i don’t do it that often

i have to be in the mood
I absolutely HATE writing, but I respect it. I think I am not built for doing these things
 
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peak writing.
 
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bump
 
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@delonisliterallyme
 
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@got.daim

@JeanneDArcAlter
 
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i’ll start this off by saying i will admit the truth, im ungrateful for that of which i have, this unquenchable itching i have towards the pondering of my own tragic life

i think i’m some sort of martyr, some scapegoat
sent out into the wilderness, tainted by sin not of my own doing

some tragic poet, a innocent soul driven into the very wastes and landfills

Im not the protagonist of anything other than my life, surely had i been the centerpiece of a book or movie

It would’ve been a tragedy
my s GIF



My soul is clean and pure, innocent and virgin.


The young affluent handsome intelligent athletic sensitive boy has nowhere to go

for everywhere he may go all he will see is a torn wasteland,
a landfill ridden with corpses,
corpses which do not decay,
corpses that may walk,
may talk,
may blink,
may smile,
may even have a heartbeat should you press your ear against their chest

yet all he sees are corpses, the precious boy is alone, he is lonely, and he is aware of this

so the precious young boy searches and searches, only to be mistaken yet he dig through piles of corpses and cadavers

only to be mistaken, for he pour his soul out, for he put a piece of himself in the fire, maybe the smoke will bring another to thyself

the precious boy is sad and sullen, as the puzzle piece so intricately carved may not have a pair, for the machine might’ve broken or for his union be far away he may not find it,

even if the young boy searches countless days and countless nights
countless springs
countless summers
countless autumns
countless winters

he may not be successful even then, the precious boy knows this yet he hopes,
the young boy hopes and dreams

saar just poop outside to improve mental health 🇮🇳:ogre:
 
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i’ll start this off by saying i will admit the truth, im ungrateful for that of which i have, this unquenchable itching i have towards the pondering of my own tragic life

i think i’m some sort of martyr, some scapegoat
sent out into the wilderness, tainted by sin not of my own doing

some tragic poet, a innocent soul driven into the very wastes and landfills

Im not the protagonist of anything other than my life, surely had i been the centerpiece of a book or movie

It would’ve been a tragedy
my s GIF



My soul is clean and pure, innocent and virgin.


The young affluent handsome intelligent athletic sensitive boy has nowhere to go

for everywhere he may go all he will see is a torn wasteland,
a landfill ridden with corpses,
corpses which do not decay,
corpses that may walk,
may talk,
may blink,
may smile,
may even have a heartbeat should you press your ear against their chest

yet all he sees are corpses, the precious boy is alone, he is lonely, and he is aware of this

so the precious young boy searches and searches, only to be mistaken yet he dig through piles of corpses and cadavers

only to be mistaken, for he pour his soul out, for he put a piece of himself in the fire, maybe the smoke will bring another to thyself

the precious boy is sad and sullen, as the puzzle piece so intricately carved may not have a pair, for the machine might’ve broken or for his union be far away he may not find it,

even if the young boy searches countless days and countless nights
countless springs
countless summers
countless autumns
countless winters

he may not be successful even then, the precious boy knows this yet he hopes,
the young boy hopes and dreams

bunp
 
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i’ll start this off by saying i will admit the truth, im ungrateful for that of which i have, this unquenchable itching i have towards the pondering of my own tragic life

i think i’m some sort of martyr, some scapegoat
sent out into the wilderness, tainted by sin not of my own doing

some tragic poet, a innocent soul driven into the very wastes and landfills

Im not the protagonist of anything other than my life, surely had i been the centerpiece of a book or movie

It would’ve been a tragedy
my s GIF



My soul is clean and pure, innocent and virgin.


The young affluent handsome intelligent athletic sensitive boy has nowhere to go

for everywhere he may go all he will see is a torn wasteland,
a landfill ridden with corpses,
corpses which do not decay,
corpses that may walk,
may talk,
may blink,
may smile,
may even have a heartbeat should you press your ear against their chest

yet all he sees are corpses, the precious boy is alone, he is lonely, and he is aware of this

so the precious young boy searches and searches, only to be mistaken yet he dig through piles of corpses and cadavers

only to be mistaken, for he pour his soul out, for he put a piece of himself in the fire, maybe the smoke will bring another to thyself

the precious boy is sad and sullen, as the puzzle piece so intricately carved may not have a pair, for the machine might’ve broken or for his union be far away he may not find it,

even if the young boy searches countless days and countless nights
countless springs
countless summers
countless autumns
countless winters

he may not be successful even then, the precious boy knows this yet he hopes,
the young boy hopes and dreams

I ain’t reading allat
 
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