What can I do to improve

[izaka80]

Im aware that my lower third is a flaw, altough the camera distortion makes it look really bad Here, however what should you say my rating is rn and what can I improve?

 

[simplyvrilliant]

fix uee hltn

Im aware that my lower third is a flaw, altough the camera distortion makes it look really bad Here, however what should you say my rating is rn and what can I improve?
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[izaka80]

fix uee hltn

Thanks, how do I?

 

[simplyvrilliant]

Thanks, how do I?

orbitis oculi and squinting also like my comments

 

[194Cm True MMTN]

change hair and debloat now HLTN-LMTN

 

[izaka80]

change hair and debloat now HLTN-LMTN

What should I change it to?