What do you all think of this song I wrote?

[PJFPJW]

Oh God, Oh God, Oh God, Oh God, Oh God, Oh God Oh I Love You

Oh God, Oh God I Just Want To Kiss Every Little Bit Of Your Body, Right Now

Oh God, Oh God If Only This Love Wasn’t Just One Way

Why Did I Do This? Why Did I Do This?
My love for you is through the roof
Now I realise that I love you

Oh God, Oh God, Oh God, Oh God, Oh God, Oh God Oh I Love You

Oh God, Oh God I Just Want To Kiss Every Little Bit Of Your Body, Right Now

Oh God, Oh God If Only This Love Wasn’t Just One Way

I am so sorry, I am so sorry
For you to be hurt, would really hurt me
Now I realise that I love you

Oh God, Oh God, Oh God, Oh God, Oh God, Oh God Oh I Love You

Oh God, Oh God I Just Want To Kiss Every Little Bit Of Your Body, Right Now

Oh God, Oh God If Only This Love Wasn’t Just One Way

I was so wro-hong, I was so wro-hong
You were always just so nice to me
And now I realise that I love you

Oh God, Oh God, Oh God, Oh God, Oh God, Oh God Oh I Love You

Oh God, Oh God I Just Want To Kiss Every Little Bit Of Your Body, Right Now

Oh God, Oh God If Only This Love Wasn’t Just One Way

Oh God, Oh God I Only Love You, You, It’s Only You!

 

[jockidc120610]

someone check on this guy

 

[Zeekie]

please don't write music ever again

 

[Node]

Please kill your self

 

[Effigy]

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[penaldinho]

I like the part in which you talk about moneymaking and success

 

[Сигма Бой]