Writing a concept of a game, should I include looksmaxing in it

[whitecelcoper]

It's gonna be called vices
The mc basically loses all of his friends because of rumours
He becomes addicted to the internet and gets an app that's basically tiktok but with barely any guidelines
He can either become an alcoholic, porn addict, school shooter, join the military and commit war crimes against minorities or become a professional gamer
There will be only one good ending where he gets a girlfriend and she helps him out and they get married
I'm not sure if I should include a looksmaxing route where he either goes ER or ropes
I obviously won't mention this forum nor Elliot Rodger, but it'll be heavily inspired from these things
Should I?
@Jenson @Divineincel @strongmtn_ @motionmantris @Divineincel

 

[motionmantris]

It's gonna be called vices
The mc basically loses all of his friends because of rumours
He becomes addicted to the internet and gets an app that's basically tiktok but with barely any guidelines
He can either become an alcoholic, porn addict, school shooter, join the military and commit war crimes against minorities or become a professional gamer
There will be only one good ending where he gets a girlfriend and she helps him out and they get married
I'm not sure if I should include a looksmaxing route where he either goes ER or ropes
I obviously won't mention this forum nor Elliot Rodger, but it'll be heavily inspired from these things
Should I?
@Jenson @Divineincel @strongmtn_ @motionmantris @Divineincel

Nigga made a game off of HIS life

 

[Lexapro]

It's gonna be called vices
The mc basically loses all of his friends because of rumours
He becomes addicted to the internet and gets an app that's basically tiktok but with barely any guidelines
He can either become an alcoholic, porn addict, school shooter, join the military and commit war crimes against minorities or become a professional gamer
There will be only one good ending where he gets a girlfriend and she helps him out and they get married
I'm not sure if I should include a looksmaxing route where he either goes ER or ropes
I obviously won't mention this forum nor Elliot Rodger, but it'll be heavily inspired from these things
Should I?
@Jenson @Divineincel @strongmtn_ @motionmantris @Divineincel

hmm you could a little but the route where he ropes would be good

 

[whitecelcoper]

Nigga made a game off of HIS life

*Inspired from my life
faggot

 

[whitecelcoper]

hmm you could a little but the route where he ropes would be good

Yeah I thought so too
I'm just asking the forum for an opinion

 

[Jgns]

give him an obsessed gf (or bf that would an interesting angle) and make them do crazy shit

 

[motionmantris]

*Inspired from my life
faggot

Can u code bra if so then ill be waiting for ts to drop papa

 

[whitecelcoper]

give him an obsessed gf (or bf that would an interesting angle) and make them do crazy shit

I won't include fag shit because I will have to draw gay porn

 

[Lexapro]

Yeah I thought so too
I'm just asking the forum for an opinion

when this drops lmk it actually is a good idea imo, is it gonna be like a ddlc kinda game

 

[Sandriguez]

It's gonna be called vices
The mc basically loses all of his friends because of rumours
He becomes addicted to the internet and gets an app that's basically tiktok but with barely any guidelines
He can either become an alcoholic, porn addict, school shooter, join the military and commit war crimes against minorities or become a professional gamer
There will be only one good ending where he gets a girlfriend and she helps him out and they get married
I'm not sure if I should include a looksmaxing route where he either goes ER or ropes
I obviously won't mention this forum nor Elliot Rodger, but it'll be heavily inspired from these things
Should I?
@Jenson @Divineincel @strongmtn_ @motionmantris @Divineincel

if I were you I’d include lm themes but not necessarily a lm route

 

[Jgns]

I won't include fag shit because I will have to draw gay porn

yaoi is pretty huge with girls these days tbf

 

[Sandriguez]

Happy birthday Daniel

 

[whitecelcoper]

Can u code bra if so then ill be waiting for ts to drop papa

I can code in c++ and python
I do not know how the fuck html works but I will figure it out

 

[Lexapro]

give him an obsessed gf (or bf that would an interesting angle) and make them do crazy shit

future hexum is here, i barely recognised u from ur avi

 

[Jgns]

future hexum is here, i barely recognised u from ur avi

ahh hell nah im not hexum, I think u got me mixed up with someone else gang

 

[whitecelcoper]

when this drops lmk it actually is a good idea imo, is it gonna be like a ddlc kinda game

I'd say it's psychological horror
I'll add hallucinations and paranoia due to the lack of sleep too

 

[Lexapro]

ahh hell nah im not hexum, I think u got me mixed up with someone else gang

no no i remember vividly dont worry boyo

 

[Lexapro]

I'd say it's psychological horror
I'll add hallucinations and paranoia due to the lack of sleep too

take some inspo from miside i thought that game was amazing

 

[edcel]

Add incest

 

[Jgns]

no no i remember vividly dont worry boyo

ohh ok what was my avi before?

 

[Lexapro]

ohh ok what was my avi before?

hexum dont try me

 

[motionmantris]

I can code in c++ and python
I do not know how the fuck html works but I will figure it out

Nigga i dont speak geek

 

[whitecelcoper]

if I were you I’d include lm themes but not necessarily a lm route

My whole idea is that in one route he's a volcel who views himself as an incel (I will not actually include the word "incel" because it would stigmatize incels a lot) and he ends up shooting women because of his anger towards them
I also want to make him look at himself in the mirror everyday until he breaks down and shoots his brains out

 

[Jgns]

hexum dont try me

nah it was never hexum lmao its always been yoshikage kira u def have me mixed up with smn else, maybe with tgun or smt

 

[Jgns]

My whole idea is that in one route he's a volcel who views himself as an incel (I will not actually include the word "incel" because it would stigmatize incels a lot) and he ends up shooting women because of his anger towards them
I also want to make him look at himself in the mirror everyday until he breaks down and shoots his brains out

damn that last part is actually pretty interesting. just going on a killing spree is kinda boring though

 

[whitecelcoper]

yaoi is pretty huge with girls these days tbf

Fuck it I'll make it so you can choose who he ends up with
I will still only be drawing porn of foids
He will like both genders so teenage girls play my game

 

[droidmaxxing]

It's gonna be called vices
The mc basically loses all of his friends because of rumours
He becomes addicted to the internet and gets an app that's basically tiktok but with barely any guidelines
He can either become an alcoholic, porn addict, school shooter, join the military and commit war crimes against minorities or become a professional gamer
There will be only one good ending where he gets a girlfriend and she helps him out and they get married
I'm not sure if I should include a looksmaxing route where he either goes ER or ropes
I obviously won't mention this forum nor Elliot Rodger, but it'll be heavily inspired from these things
Should I?
@Jenson @Divineincel @strongmtn_ @motionmantris @Divineincel

The bad ending will be
He gets doxxed by his opps

 

[Lexapro]

nah it was never hexum lmao its always been yoshikage kira u def have me mixed up with smn else, maybe with tgun or smt

im gonna fucking rope im sorry it was tgun i got you mixed up with excuse my incompetence

 

[whitecelcoper]

take some inspo from miside i thought that game was amazing

I'll play it sure
Although I've been thinking about this for a while
Maybe just the style of the game because I already decided what the dialogue is gonna be like

 

[Inedmonz]

yes ER route

 

[Lexapro]

I'll play it sure
Although I've been thinking about this for a while
Maybe just the style of the game because I already decided what the dialogue is gonna be like

i watched joebart play it and i played it myself thought it was super well made

 

[Jgns]

Fuck it I'll make it so you can choose who he ends up with
I will still only be drawing porn of foids
He will like both genders so teenage girls play my game

whats ur art like? Honestly a game thats stuck with me the hardest has been the coffin of andy and laylay. probably the best story+ dialogue and premise ive ever seen in a game. Plus the forbidden fruit relationship plus they're like my aesthetic hit so hard dude, such a fire ass game. I'd try to take inspo but it would probably be hard without obv ripping them off somehow, thats kinda why I said a bf cause it kinda hits the same forbidden fruit thingy.

 

[whitecelcoper]

damn that last part is actually pretty interesting. just going on a killing spree is kinda boring though

I thought about his eternal thoughts for this ending and it's why I want to do it. It'll be something amongst the lines of
"You finally did it. You monster. You can't cover up the hatred anymore. Everyone knows. Everyone knows what you did. Everything is your fault. You chose this. What will your parents think? What will your crush think? You are disgusting. You should die, just like those poor souls did. You should die live through the same fate. Well? Do it. Shoot yourself. Rot with the maggots. You will be 6 feet under, where you deserve to be. Die"
And then he shoots himself and there's a picture of the newspaper where they're basically shit talking him and someone wrote over it with a pen trying to justify his actions (it'll be implied it was someone close to him trying to deal with the trauma)

 

[whitecelcoper]

whats ur art like? Honestly a game thats stuck with me the hardest has been the coffin of andy and laylay. probably the best story+ dialogue and premise ive ever seen in a game. Plus the forbidden fruit relationship plus they're like my aesthetic hit so hard dude, such a fire ass game. I'd try to take inspo but it would probably be hard without obv ripping them off somehow, thats kinda why I said a bf cause it kinda hits the same forbidden fruit thingy.

Yeah I'll make the style of the game similar, but my artstyle is different
I like the vibe of "human or not", so it'll be kind of semi realism with pictures of actual places as the background

 

[Jgns]

I thought about his eternal thoughts for this ending and it's why I want to do it. It'll be something amongst the lines of
"You finally did it. You monster. You can't cover up the hatred anymore. Everyone knows. Everyone knows what you did. Everything is your fault. You chose this. What will your parents think? What will your crush think? You are disgusting. You should die, just like those poor souls did. You should die live through the same fate. Well? Do it. Shoot yourself. Rot with the maggots. You will be 6 feet under, where you deserve to be. Die"
And then he shoots himself and there's a picture of the newspaper where they're basically shit talking him and someone wrote over it with a pen trying to justify his actions (it'll be implied it was someone close to him trying to deal with the trauma)

ig that could be hard hitting if the story is written well enough so that you develop a really strong connection with the main character, if not it'll come off as incredibly corny so watch out. plus imagine when he dies it shows a completely different perspective of girls actually liking him or smt along those lines, kinda to show that his pov wasnt reliable at all. Kinda like the attack on titan scene at the end with the tree

 

[Van]

Nigga made a game off of HIS life

 

[Jgns]

Yeah I'll make the style of the game similar, but my artstyle is different
I like the vibe of "human or not", so it'll be kind of semi realism with pictures of actual places as the background

oh yeah that game's aesthetic is beautiful, too bad it couldnt deliver at all lol. maybe like with what I said before changing the artsyle after or maybe like having a second character's pov you see through throughout the game would be fire asf, like a completely different artstyle maybe with none of that existential dread that the mc has to contrast him or smt aswell

 

[whitecelcoper]

ig that could be hard hitting if the story is written well enough so that you develop a really strong connection with the main character, if not it'll come off as incredibly corny so watch out. plus imagine when he dies it shows a completely different perspective of girls actually liking him or smt along those lines, kinda to show that his pov wasnt reliable at all. Kinda like the attack on titan scene at the end with the tree

The narrator is the mc's inner monologue, so everything includes his personal thoughts. Like for example when you have to choose if you want to study the narrator says "Should I study? I don't have an upcoming exam so it's kind of pointless, but education, right?"

 

[whitecelcoper]

oh yeah that game's aesthetic is beautiful, too bad it couldnt deliver at all lol. maybe like with what I said before changing the artsyle after or maybe like having a second character's pov you see through throughout the game would be fire asf, like a completely different artstyle maybe with none of that existential dread that the mc has to contrast him or smt aswell

The existential dread is kind of what I'm going for. I could take inspiration from tcoaal and use a more simplistic artstyle most of the time to put emphasis on some scenes

 

[Jgns]

The existential dread is kind of what I'm going for. I could take inspiration from tcoaal and use a more simplistic artstyle most of the time to put emphasis on some scenes

hmm the existential dread part is so hard to get right tbh, like I never really see it replicated in any stories, well except those two black mirror episodes shut up and dance and the other one where the guy tries the vr game for the first time. U gt make it seem likes even god's eye is watching from the skys with disdian on the mcs disgusting visage

 

[Jenson]

so much creativity

it’s good that your life experiences can be used as a cool game

 

[whitecelcoper]

hmm the existential dread part is so hard to get right tbh, like I never really see it replicated in any stories, well except those two black mirror episodes shut up and dance and the other one where the guy tries the vr game for the first time. U gt make it seem likes even god's eye is watching from the skys with disdian on the mcs disgusting visage

I'm aware, but I feel like I only want to include regret for his actions in the endings, not so much in the gameplay

 

[whitecelcoper]

so much creativity

it’s good that your life experiences can be used as a cool game

Did I shoot up a school and commit war crimes

 

[Jenson]

Did I shoot up a school and commit war crimes

potentially

 

[1966Ford]

For sure. Add Chads and subhumans

 

[whitecelcoper]

For sure. Add Chads and subhumans

The chads will bully him! I don't want to add subhumans, too much hopefuel

 

[Notcel]

add .org users

 

[Jgns]

add .org users

ADD ME ! could i be a chad

 

[whitecelcoper]

add .org users

I'll make a forum and add them there because it would be absurd for whitecelcoper to approach him

 

[buccalfatremoval]

Add a buccal fat removal cut scene