Youtube video I made. Rate outta ten

[Mark Antony]

Be brutal as the world is brutal.

 

[DrRodger]

No

 

[fearoffoids2.0]

Be brutal as the world is brutal. View attachment 5400175

Not even trying to hate but this is ass. Those style of videos are outdated and you talk like a retard. People want a voice that keeps them hooked in, u talk like you are reading off a script

 

[Mark Antony]

Not even trying to hate but this is ass. Those style of videos are outdated and you talk like a retard. People want a voice that keeps them hooked in, u talk like you are reading off a script

Can't change my voice, so it's whatever. It's not outdated btw. You just don't watch them anymore.

 

[fearoffoids2.0]

Can't change my voice, so it's whatever. It's not outdated btw. You just don't watch them anymore.

it’s outdated, in this era everybody has a short attention span so nobody wants to hear a guy with a depressed tone stuttering his words for 5minutes.

 

[TheWigger]

Can't change my voice, so it's whatever. It's not outdated btw. You just don't watch them anymore.

you can definitely change your tonality, rhythm, word choice etc to make the video more engaging it just takes time.

 

[TheWigger]

especially rhythm your talking way too fast not allowing any breathing room for yourself and for people to process what your saying.

 

[Jidion]

The video isn't horrible and the message is good. It's obviously gonna be kinda boring for those dopamine addicted kids, but do we really wanna change their lives or just let natural selection do it's thing. If sm1 stumble's on this video and is really interested on the topic, he's gonna listen till the end. 7/10. Pretty good for a small project.

 

[Mark Antony]

The video isn't horrible and the message is good. It's obviously gonna be kinda boring for those dopamine addicted kids, but do we really wanna change their lives or just let natural selection do it's thing. If sm1 stumble's on this video and is really interested on the topic, he's gonna listen till the end. 7/10. Pretty good for a small project.

Thanks

 

[Mark Antony]

it’s outdated, in this era everybody has a short attention span so nobody wants to hear a guy with a depressed tone stuttering his words for 5minutes.

Rehab room exist lol

 

[Jidion]

Also i would say your voice has potential for a youtuber

 

[iblameloweffort]

it’s outdated, in this era everybody has a short attention span so nobody wants to hear a guy with a depressed tone stuttering his words for 5minutes.

bpfitness also has the same style