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Users @averagejoe and @WishIwasChico are having a long beef of who produces the better slaying stories. Let's settle it. Which Slaying story mogs?
Rate them based on the well-known PSL criteria of jealousy induction, eroticism, believability and narrative talent.
Believability is the equivalent of facial harmony for slaying stories: if it's lacking, all falls apart, even if the other criteria are good.
@averagejoe (fka crisick)
Slay: woman depicted in the photo, but not further described. (The reader is left to use his imagination of her beauty and feminine charisma.) Can cook.
Slay description: Author uses concise, confident and minimalist writing style, letting the unspoken words speak for themselves: You have them come over, cook for you, fuck with you and you just enjoy it while sipping a glass of champagne
Seduction method: (Presumably, not actually specified.) Rugged good looks, an aura of mature masculinity and confidence. Display of an above-average taste in kitchen furniture.
Evidence provided: Photograph of a late night kitchen scene: @averagejoe holding a glass of premiumapple juice champagne and a cooking woman, with her face covered by a smile emoji.
Slayer looks:
Estimated believability: ???
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@WishIwasChico
Slay: "She had perfect pheno, pale and blonde, and high E ass. Fucking ideal tbh. She looked very regal looking irl she had bright green eyes and very good forward growth. Very attractive naturally I was shocked. She wore a dress and heels and did all her hair she looked really good I was shocked. She said she’s never met someone off tinder before and been on it since October since she got out of he relationship."
Seduction method: A convincing, striking Tinder profile attracting women in a 200 km radius. Display of family wealth through implied ownership of an (unspecified) BMW automotive vehicle.
Slay description: It should be noted the slay drove 170 kilometres to meet the author in a hotel room, which she paid for. Author uses maximalist, detailed, expressive writing style, leaving little to imagination: "She squirted 5 times, the hotel bed was soaked in the morning we had to put a towel there jfl. She saw me as legit chad it was insane never made a girl that wet in my life…When we met she was shaking she was so nervous and stuttering so much. She was so fucking nervous haha. Was really good didn’t sleep much as we went to bed at 4 but woke up each other up and fucked at 7am a few more times lol. Fucked everywhere, on the bed, shower, against the wall. It was insane sex tbh."
Provided evidence: Snippet of an amicable WhatsApp conversation. Photograph of hands on a scantily clad, (presumably) female buttocks.
Slayer looks: (Never provided a photograph of himself, so I use a stock image of a young, upper class Asian male.)
Estimated believability: ???
Reactions to the thread:
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Rate them based on the well-known PSL criteria of jealousy induction, eroticism, believability and narrative talent.
Believability is the equivalent of facial harmony for slaying stories: if it's lacking, all falls apart, even if the other criteria are good.
@averagejoe (fka crisick)
Slay: woman depicted in the photo, but not further described. (The reader is left to use his imagination of her beauty and feminine charisma.) Can cook.
Slay description: Author uses concise, confident and minimalist writing style, letting the unspoken words speak for themselves: You have them come over, cook for you, fuck with you and you just enjoy it while sipping a glass of champagne
Seduction method: (Presumably, not actually specified.) Rugged good looks, an aura of mature masculinity and confidence. Display of an above-average taste in kitchen furniture.
Evidence provided: Photograph of a late night kitchen scene: @averagejoe holding a glass of premium
Slayer looks:
Estimated believability: ???
Reactions to the thread:
This is how you do it
@WishIwasChico This is how you do it son You have them come over, cook for you, fuck with you and you just enjoy it while sipping a glass of champagne You don’t text yourself and write novels with XX’s in every single message passing it for “UK slang” jfl
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@WishIwasChico
Slay: "She had perfect pheno, pale and blonde, and high E ass. Fucking ideal tbh. She looked very regal looking irl she had bright green eyes and very good forward growth. Very attractive naturally I was shocked. She wore a dress and heels and did all her hair she looked really good I was shocked. She said she’s never met someone off tinder before and been on it since October since she got out of he relationship."
Seduction method: A convincing, striking Tinder profile attracting women in a 200 km radius. Display of family wealth through implied ownership of an (unspecified) BMW automotive vehicle.
Slay description: It should be noted the slay drove 170 kilometres to meet the author in a hotel room, which she paid for. Author uses maximalist, detailed, expressive writing style, leaving little to imagination: "She squirted 5 times, the hotel bed was soaked in the morning we had to put a towel there jfl. She saw me as legit chad it was insane never made a girl that wet in my life…When we met she was shaking she was so nervous and stuttering so much. She was so fucking nervous haha. Was really good didn’t sleep much as we went to bed at 4 but woke up each other up and fucked at 7am a few more times lol. Fucked everywhere, on the bed, shower, against the wall. It was insane sex tbh."
Provided evidence: Snippet of an amicable WhatsApp conversation. Photograph of hands on a scantily clad, (presumably) female buttocks.
Slayer looks: (Never provided a photograph of himself, so I use a stock image of a young, upper class Asian male.)
Estimated believability: ???
Reactions to the thread:
Home after fucking 170km foid
Will make high effort thread later but was insane. She had very high E ass that jiggled like fuck, was so fucking hot. She squirted 5 times, the hotel bed was soaked in the morning we had to put a towel there jfl. She saw me as legit chad it was insane never made a girl that wet in my life…...
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@ReadBooksEveryday @Beastimmung @Eli @BrahminBoss @forevermirin @Xangsane @Xtra @the BULL @Kristin @kebab @wsada @Akhi @socialcel @distance decay @AspiringMogger @Skywalker @Manchild@Kamui @Master, @Vermilioncore, @ascension, @worldmog, @scrunchables, @kwacker777, @House Lannister, @volcelfatcel, @Schery6
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