Can someone point out my flaws of my side harmony?

[revolt27]

I'll send you photos in dms, would be very appreciated

 

[Nike Just Do It]

I'll send you photos in dms, would be very appreciated

send them to me

 

[revolt27]

I can't start the conversation so dm me first please

 

[revolt27]

send them to me

could you dm me? I don't have 'start conversation' button

 

[Nike Just Do It]

i did