Do yall See any improvement Computer to my previor Post??? Help Pls Tell me mayor flaws

[moidcel271k]

do yall See any improvements made since the last time I asked for a Rating??? softmaxxed a Bit but mainly better coloring id say
Pls rate and give Tipps how to improve
Age 51
Also Whats your fav eyebrow dye

 

[moidcel271k]

This was before so yall dont have to search