Rate my attempt at traditional chinese poetry

[Magical Apple]

我想死
Wǒ xiǎng sǐ

在春天
Zài chūntiān

看上次
Kàn Shàng cì

梅花落
Méihuā luò

清晚天
Qīng wǎn Tiān


I want to die,
In spring,
and look one last time,
at the plum blossoms falling on a clear night.




@Collagen or rope @Vietnam

 

[Deleted member 6573]

我想死
Wǒ xiǎng sǐ

在春天
Zài chūntiān

看上次
Kàn Shàng cì

梅花落
Méihuā luò

清晚天
Qīng wǎn Tiān


I want to die,
In spring,
and look one last time,
at the plum blossoms falling on a clear night.




@Collagen or rope @Vietnam

Beautiful poem comrade, 非常好听

 

[Deleted member 16960]

How come i dont get notification when tagged
I can relate to Chinese culture tbh

 

[Deleted member 16960]

Heres a poem i wrote for you bro

南國山河南帝居
截然定分在天書
如何逆虜來侵犯
汝等行看取敗虛

Nánguó shān hénán dì jū
jiérán dìng fēn zài tiān shū
rúhé nì lǔ lái qīnfàn
rǔ děng xíng kàn qǔ bài xū

@Collagen or rope @Magical Apple

 

[johncruz12345]

Beautiful 太美了