rate my opening for a rap song

[juste]

yea gta baby
gta bitch

YEA
GTA

they be livin it so serious
for me a joke, a grievious
they are being watched by the divine oculus
their confidence will be proved as deleterious

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[juste]

still I'm the lord of heavens the glorious
her fucking persistence is tedious
others might cope but they are only envious
don't play with me i can be furious

the gloomy bookworm thinks she can control
even for a while and in a simulation she fine with it
some users thought that they would convince me use oils castor
zero fucks given for my appearance here,in heaven im a exhibit

 

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