Rate my sexy Hurricane Idalia X Hurricane Franklin fanfiction (reformatted)

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Too many paragraphs about a moment. Shorten it up. For example.

She wanted to fuck. I could tell. "Ugh, get naked whore, I'll fuck you." Quickly, she got naked and I fucked her.

The next morning ...
 
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Too many paragraphs about a moment. Shorten it up. For example.

She wanted to fuck. I could tell. "Ugh, get naked whore, I'll fuck you." Quickly, she got naked and I fucked her.

The next morning ...
Alright man.
 
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One day, Idalia woke up from her basement and had a dream about going ER in Florida. She had been dreaming about it for weeks. Her head started pounding again after she finished the dream about it. This time she thought she might be sick. She got out of bed, made breakfast, and went outside to sit in her garden. As she was sitting there, eating her breakfast, she saw that Franklin had just landed in her backyard. "Good morning, baby," he said to her while coming through the front door. "Did you miss me? " Idalia nodded yes. She knew he would be back soon enough. After the last time, Idalia knew that they were only going to see each other for one or two days a week. "Good because I missed you too," he smiled at her before kissing her forehead. He sat down on the swing beside her and watched as she ate her breakfast.

"You're still eating your breakfast. How are you feeling today? " Idalia shrugged her shoulders and kept eating her breakfast. Franklin noticed that Idalia's face wasn't really happy so he asked, "What's wrong? " Idalia shrugged again, this time saying nothing. Franklin put his hand around Idalia's waist and pulled her closer to him. He kissed Idalia softly and then continued, "I know something is bothering you. You can tell me what it is. " Idalia didn't say anything but then Franklin asked her, "Why don't we go inside? I'll make us a nice cup of coffee. " Idalia nodded at him and followed him into the house. "Do you want to talk about it right now or later? " Franklin told her once they walked inside the kitchen.

Idalia shrugged her shoulders again. "I want to go ER on Floridacel virgins while we fuck over the state. I want your thick dick so bad Frankie," she said while licking her lips. Franklin took her by surprise by pulling her to him and smashing his mouth against hers. Idalia quickly wrapped her arms around his neck, deepening the kiss. Franklin moaned at the feel of Idalia's tongue in his mouth. When he pulled away, Idalia pouted. "I'm sorry, sweetie. We'll have to wait until you're ready to ER on people again. " Idalia nodded her head and let out a moan. Franklin pulled her onto his lap and began to stroke her nipples, making Idalia moan even louder. "Fuck, Frankie, your cock feels good. "Franklin laughed at Idalia's statement and rubbed her clit harder.

The sound of Idalia moaning with pleasure made Franklin even harder. Idalia pulled away from Franklin's lips and bit them gently. "Don't stop, baby. " Idalia licked her lips again. "Please Frankie. ", she whispered in his ear. Franklin looked deep into her eyes and said, "Why do you want to destroy Florida while we fuck? " Idalia sighed and replied, "Because I like Florida, Frankie. Why does everyone hate Florida? " Franklin ran his hands down her sides and grabbed her hips. He pulled her tightly against him and growled into her throat. "It's not that I hate Florida. I hate the government."

"I know you hate them, Frankie. I know that. Everyone hates the government. "But Idalia, why did you agree to go ER on someone else? " Idalia bit her lip and looked down at Franklin's erection pressed against her belly button. "I'm sorry, Frankie. I can't answer that question. What if I get hurt or something happens to you or us? "Well, I wouldn't hurt you or us. I wouldn't let anything happen to either of us. I wouldn't let anybody hurt you because you mean too much to me and we care about each other too much to let anyone harm each other. '' Idalia smiled softly at Franklin. She leaned over and kissed him deeply.

Franklin returned the kiss hungrily. He moved her shirt off of her shoulders slowly and pulled it down. He then moved on to her bra and unclasped it. He slipped the straps of her bra off of her shoulder and kissed her breasts. He slid his tongue across her nipple before sucking on it. Idalia cried out loud when he sucked on her breast. "Oh my god, Frankie. Fuck me," she gasped. "Please please, Frankie. "Franklin smiled wickedly at Idalia and then began to suck on her nipple again. He moved his fingers to her sex and teased her lightly. Idalia groaned loudly and then cried out when Franklin slid his finger into her wetness. Idalia felt herself getting close to orgasm.

" Oh Frankie," she moaned loudly. "Come for me, Idalia. Come for me. " Franklin slid another finger into Idalia's moistness and thrust his thumb inside of her. Idalia came hard and fast, crying out loudly. Franklin held her hips firmly as he pumped his cock inside her. It was long and thick, filling her completely. Idalia could feel herself getting close to another orgasm so she closed her eyes. When she opened them again, she saw Franklin's cock still inside of her, moving up and down. He was staring directly at her and smiling. Idalia looked down and noticed all the homes were getting destroyed because they were fucking so loudly, causing much destruction to Florida. Franklin was watching her closely as he fucked her. He held her hips firmly with one hand while stroking her slit with the other.

Idalia reached down and touched his penis and it immediately hardened. She smiled at him and said, "You feel better than Florida dick, Frankie. ", to which Franklin laughed. Idalia knew that he wasn't really laughing at her joke. "Yeah I guess so", he replied as he continued to fuck her, pumping his huge dick into her hot pussy. He was already almost fully erect, meaning they were going to fuck again. Idalia spread her legs wider to accommodate his dick. Once Idalia was more open and ready for him, Franklin pushed his shaft deep inside of Idalia. Idalia screamed loudly and bucked uncontrollably as he filled her. Franklin's cock felt so big, so full. He loved having Idalia like this and he loved how tight she was. She loved his perfect body, his perfect CDO, clouds, and eyes. She loved how pretty his skin was and how perfect he looked in the sun.

Franklin felt himself becoming stiffer, harder, and faster with every thrust that Idalia gave. Amid their lovemaking, Franklin heard a noise. At first, it sounded like a gunshot but then he realized it was Idalia screaming his name. "Fuck, Frankie! " she yelled as he pounded his cloudy dick inside her elongated beef curtains which already drenched the Gulf of Mexico and Florida, the hot waters of the Gulf of Mexico soaking their bodies and making her hot, wet pussy even hotter and wetter. Idalia came again and her eyes rolled into the back of her head and she screamed even louder. Franklin felt Idalia climaxing and came with her, cumming inside of her. He collapsed on top of Idalia and both of their breathing slowed down. " Are you okay? Franklin asked Idalia in a husky voice. Idalia nodded yes but could barely talk because of all the orgasms she had just had. Franklin looked at her and smiled. He picked up a nearby towel to dry them both off and when he was done with that, they headed back upstairs.

Once inside the bedroom, Idalia lay on the bed and covered her eyes with her arm, embarrassed that she hadn't wiped herself off properly. Franklin helped her clean herself up and then kissed her forehead. "Come on. You need to rest," he told her. "We can watch TV together. " He switched the TV on and saw the news headline "HURRICANE IDALIA MAKES LANDFALL IN TAMPA AS A CATEGORY 5 HURRICANE " playing on the screen. Franklin turned the volume up as loud as it could possibly go and lay next to Idalia as he listened to the news. Idalia fell asleep after just a few minutes of laying on the bed and cuddling up with Franklin.


TLDR: Idalia wakes up from a dream about going to Florida and feels unwell. Franklin, her partner, notices her distress and tries to comfort her. They discuss their desires and concerns, and their conversation turns intimate. They engage in sexual activity, causing destruction around them. Afterward, they clean up and rest together while watching the news. Idalia falls asleep in Franklin's arms.
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Part 2

 
Mirin Idalia 😘😍
 
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One day, Idalia woke up from her basement and had a dream about going ER in Florida. She had been dreaming about it for weeks. Her head started pounding again after she finished the dream about it. This time she thought she might be sick. She got out of bed, made breakfast, and went outside to sit in her garden. As she was sitting there, eating her breakfast, she saw that Franklin had just landed in her backyard. "Good morning, baby," he said to her while coming through the front door. "Did you miss me? " Idalia nodded yes. She knew he would be back soon enough. After the last time, Idalia knew that they were only going to see each other for one or two days a week. "Good because I missed you too," he smiled at her before kissing her forehead. He sat down on the swing beside her and watched as she ate her breakfast.

"You're still eating your breakfast. How are you feeling today? " Idalia shrugged her shoulders and kept eating her breakfast. Franklin noticed that Idalia's face wasn't really happy so he asked, "What's wrong? " Idalia shrugged again, this time saying nothing. Franklin put his hand around Idalia's waist and pulled her closer to him. He kissed Idalia softly and then continued, "I know something is bothering you. You can tell me what it is. " Idalia didn't say anything but then Franklin asked her, "Why don't we go inside? I'll make us a nice cup of coffee. " Idalia nodded at him and followed him into the house. "Do you want to talk about it right now or later? " Franklin told her once they walked inside the kitchen.

Idalia shrugged her shoulders again. "I want to go ER on Floridacel virgins while we fuck over the state. I want your thick dick so bad Frankie," she said while licking her lips. Franklin took her by surprise by pulling her to him and smashing his mouth against hers. Idalia quickly wrapped her arms around his neck, deepening the kiss. Franklin moaned at the feel of Idalia's tongue in his mouth. When he pulled away, Idalia pouted. "I'm sorry, sweetie. We'll have to wait until you're ready to ER on people again. " Idalia nodded her head and let out a moan. Franklin pulled her onto his lap and began to stroke her nipples, making Idalia moan even louder. "Fuck, Frankie, your cock feels good. "Franklin laughed at Idalia's statement and rubbed her clit harder.

The sound of Idalia moaning with pleasure made Franklin even harder. Idalia pulled away from Franklin's lips and bit them gently. "Don't stop, baby. " Idalia licked her lips again. "Please Frankie. ", she whispered in his ear. Franklin looked deep into her eyes and said, "Why do you want to destroy Florida while we fuck? " Idalia sighed and replied, "Because I like Florida, Frankie. Why does everyone hate Florida? " Franklin ran his hands down her sides and grabbed her hips. He pulled her tightly against him and growled into her throat. "It's not that I hate Florida. I hate the government."

"I know you hate them, Frankie. I know that. Everyone hates the government. "But Idalia, why did you agree to go ER on someone else? " Idalia bit her lip and looked down at Franklin's erection pressed against her belly button. "I'm sorry, Frankie. I can't answer that question. What if I get hurt or something happens to you or us? "Well, I wouldn't hurt you or us. I wouldn't let anything happen to either of us. I wouldn't let anybody hurt you because you mean too much to me and we care about each other too much to let anyone harm each other. '' Idalia smiled softly at Franklin. She leaned over and kissed him deeply.

Franklin returned the kiss hungrily. He moved her shirt off of her shoulders slowly and pulled it down. He then moved on to her bra and unclasped it. He slipped the straps of her bra off of her shoulder and kissed her breasts. He slid his tongue across her nipple before sucking on it. Idalia cried out loud when he sucked on her breast. "Oh my god, Frankie. Fuck me," she gasped. "Please please, Frankie. "Franklin smiled wickedly at Idalia and then began to suck on her nipple again. He moved his fingers to her sex and teased her lightly. Idalia groaned loudly and then cried out when Franklin slid his finger into her wetness. Idalia felt herself getting close to orgasm.

" Oh Frankie," she moaned loudly. "Come for me, Idalia. Come for me. " Franklin slid another finger into Idalia's moistness and thrust his thumb inside of her. Idalia came hard and fast, crying out loudly. Franklin held her hips firmly as he pumped his cock inside her. It was long and thick, filling her completely. Idalia could feel herself getting close to another orgasm so she closed her eyes. When she opened them again, she saw Franklin's cock still inside of her, moving up and down. He was staring directly at her and smiling. Idalia looked down and noticed all the homes were getting destroyed because they were fucking so loudly, causing much destruction to Florida. Franklin was watching her closely as he fucked her. He held her hips firmly with one hand while stroking her slit with the other.

Idalia reached down and touched his penis and it immediately hardened. She smiled at him and said, "You feel better than Florida dick, Frankie. ", to which Franklin laughed. Idalia knew that he wasn't really laughing at her joke. "Yeah I guess so", he replied as he continued to fuck her, pumping his huge dick into her hot pussy. He was already almost fully erect, meaning they were going to fuck again. Idalia spread her legs wider to accommodate his dick. Once Idalia was more open and ready for him, Franklin pushed his shaft deep inside of Idalia. Idalia screamed loudly and bucked uncontrollably as he filled her. Franklin's cock felt so big, so full. He loved having Idalia like this and he loved how tight she was. She loved his perfect body, his perfect CDO, clouds, and eyes. She loved how pretty his skin was and how perfect he looked in the sun.

Franklin felt himself becoming stiffer, harder, and faster with every thrust that Idalia gave. Amid their lovemaking, Franklin heard a noise. At first, it sounded like a gunshot but then he realized it was Idalia screaming his name. "Fuck, Frankie! " she yelled as he pounded his cloudy dick inside her elongated beef curtains which already drenched the Gulf of Mexico and Florida, the hot waters of the Gulf of Mexico soaking their bodies and making her hot, wet pussy even hotter and wetter. Idalia came again and her eyes rolled into the back of her head and she screamed even louder. Franklin felt Idalia climaxing and came with her, cumming inside of her. He collapsed on top of Idalia and both of their breathing slowed down. " Are you okay? Franklin asked Idalia in a husky voice. Idalia nodded yes but could barely talk because of all the orgasms she had just had. Franklin looked at her and smiled. He picked up a nearby towel to dry them both off and when he was done with that, they headed back upstairs.

Once inside the bedroom, Idalia lay on the bed and covered her eyes with her arm, embarrassed that she hadn't wiped herself off properly. Franklin helped her clean herself up and then kissed her forehead. "Come on. You need to rest," he told her. "We can watch TV together. " He switched the TV on and saw the news headline "HURRICANE IDALIA MAKES LANDFALL IN TAMPA AS A CATEGORY 5 HURRICANE " playing on the screen. Franklin turned the volume up as loud as it could possibly go and lay next to Idalia as he listened to the news. Idalia fell asleep after just a few minutes of laying on the bed and cuddling up with Franklin.


TLDR: Idalia wakes up from a dream about going to Florida and feels unwell. Franklin, her partner, notices her distress and tries to comfort her. They discuss their desires and concerns, and their conversation turns intimate. They engage in sexual activity, causing destruction around them. Afterward, they clean up and rest together while watching the news. Idalia falls asleep in Franklin's arms.


  1. Idalia:
    • Idalia is depicted as a character with strong desires and passions, particularly in her expressions of sexual desire and her willingness to engage in intimate activities with Franklin.
    • She appears to be spontaneous and impulsive in her actions and desires.
    • Idalia expresses affection and attachment to Franklin, as indicated by her response when he asks if she missed him.
    • She is open about her emotions and desires, not hesitating to share her feelings with Franklin.
    • Idalia is also portrayed as someone who enjoys a sense of adventure or excitement, as suggested by her desire to "ER on Floridacel virgins" (note: this phrase contains explicit content).
  2. Franklin:
    • Franklin comes across as attentive and caring toward Idalia. He notices her distress and seeks to comfort her when she appears unhappy.
    • He is patient and understanding, reassuring Idalia and offering her emotional support.
    • Franklin also exhibits a strong physical attraction to Idalia and actively participates in their intimate moments.
    • He appears to have a protective and nurturing side, as seen in his willingness to clean up after their encounter and watch over her as she falls asleep.
    • Franklin expresses concerns about safety and consequences, particularly regarding Idalia's desires, indicating a cautious and protective nature.
 

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