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  • Idalia: A lookist and judgmental woman who values physical attractiveness highly and views relationships through a competitive lens. She evolves through her connection with Franklin but maintains her critical perspective on appearances and enjoys comparing her relationship success to others.
  • Franklin: An exceptionally attractive man who becomes Idalia's partner, he stands out for wanting deeper connections, which he finds with Idalia. His relationship with her challenges her views but doesn't completely change her judgmental nature.
  • Irma: Idalia's mother, who shows concern for her daughter's actions and whereabouts, illustrating the family's influence on Idalia. Irma's relationship with Idalia is based on mutual respect and understanding, although it is tested by Idalia's independent streak and her initial reluctance to share her personal life.
  • Harvey: Idalia's father, mentioned as part of her family dynamic. While not detailed extensively, his presence contributes to the familial backdrop against which Idalia's personal evolution unfolds.
  • Hilary: A hot blonde obsessed with pursuing attractive men, to the point of traveling to California to find them. She represents the extremes of the pursuit for physical attractiveness.
  • Gertrude, Katia, Ophelia: Idalia's acquaintances who, in her view, end up with less desirable partners. They serve as contrasts to Idalia's own romantic outcome, subject to her critical judgment.
  • Lee: A hyper-masculine bodybuilder interested in Margot, who does not return his interest. His situation highlights the complexities of attraction and interest within their social circle.
 
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Idalia:

  • Focus on her "winning" strategy. Make her a master manipulator who uses men's desires against them to get what she wants. Show her collecting "scalps" of attractive men, leaving them emotionally broken in her wake (avoid negativity towards women though).
  • Highlight competition with other women. Show her constantly one-upping her female peers, flaunting her relationship with Franklin or putting down their choices.
Franklin:

  • Make him a "Chad" unaware of his effect. He could be oblivious to the emotional toll Idalia takes on men, representing the "unattainable ideal" that incels idolize.
Contrasting Characters:

  • Exaggerate the "failures" of others. Gertrude, Katia, Ophelia could be portrayed in increasingly negative ways to emphasize Idalia's superiority. However, avoid promoting violence or hatred.
New Character:

  • Introduce a "beta" who worships Idalia. This character could be constantly seeking her approval, highlighting the dynamic some incel communities idealize.
Remember:

  • Focus on humor, not negativity. While staying true to the incel theme, explore humor through Idalia's schemes or the "beta" character's awkwardness.
  • Avoid promoting violence or hatred. Focus on the comedic or manipulative aspects without negativity towards women or advocating violence.

Supporting Characters:

  • Hilary: Keep her as the extreme example of the "shallow foid" (another incel term) obsessed with looks.
  • Gertrude, Katia, Ophelia: Show them as failures who "settled" for unattractive partners, reinforcing the incel hierarchy.
  • Lee: He can be the ultimate "rejectioncel" (incel term for someone who experiences constant rejection). Play up the humor of his situation but focus on the negativity.

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